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Reviews for Chocolate and Roses

By : hColleen
  • From JubblesBubbles on November 08, 2010
    Why oh why would I flame you abou the odd pairing?

    I look for those!!! Canons are great, but odd couples are always interesting, and this particularly, I loved it!!! I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ^^
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  • From ANON - LRH on November 24, 2006
    Cool
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  • From on November 21, 2005
    very delicious smut there. kind of an odd pairing, but i did enjoy it. you do write these scenes so beautifully vivid. keep it up!
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on July 13, 2005
    Hehehe.... that was fun! *gets out a sketchypad* Koenma and Yoko sitting in a tree, K-I... crud. I'm not going to finish typing that.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on July 13, 2005
    Mmm, I hope there's a sequel. I like the idea that Koenma was interested in having sex with Kurama (ch. 1) but needed someone to forcefully take control away so that he could relax and enjoy it. Youko mentioned in his thoughts that he already had Hiei and Yusuke. Is this story connected to one you already have, or in a stand alone universe?

    Finished the beta and sent it to your gmail account. Let me know what you think of it.
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  • From KuwaLover on July 12, 2005
    THat was just too hot!!! Excellent job!! Five stars!! Thank you for making this fic! Koenma does need more lovin! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Eye of Ra on July 12, 2005
    heh. that was *quite* amusing. ^^ very entertaining. *giggles* i loved it. and i am very curious to see what you'll come up with for the second half. and i cant say anything... cause im doing a two part one right now myself. LoL. so yeh. ^^

    later!
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on July 11, 2005
    Wow, Koenma. I wasn't expecting that at all, in fact I thought it was Shuuichi tied up in some depraved part of his mind. I like the pairing, it's fun and I wish more people did something with Koenma. But I do have to say this needs a betaing. There are a couple of repeated phrases, some missing letters, and a sentence that got cut off in the middle. Other wise, nice concept, can't wait for ch. 2.
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  • From ANON - bob on July 11, 2005
    i did not expect the captor to be koenma but please continue
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  • From bitBlackmage on July 11, 2005
    Well... you weren't limited to what was on my list because those pairings listed were the ones that popped into my head. I try not to have too much Kurama/Yoko stuff because I'd rather swim against the current. Nothing wrong with him-- it's just that there's too much of him.

    The story... *is stoic and scary-looking* no. Unacceptable. *turns into crazed puppy-eyed creature* We need a chapter before I go into cardiac arrest! Koenma's so ignored and nobody really touches on anything related to him! It's shameful I say!
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on July 11, 2005
    Holy shit! I need to get my eyes checked! Did you do something different? Sorry. It's just that I come to expect certain things from certain people... you know how it is when you're conditioned-- and then it suddenly changes! That was seriously good and exciting!

    *dances around like a drunken ballerina* Lalalalalala! Woo~oo~oo~oooo!
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  • From kogaluver on July 11, 2005
    Wow H! That was fucking awesome. Koenma and Yoko too damn hot. I'm so jealous I didn't think of that. I agree with you that Altar didn't have it on her wishlist either. I'm gonna do a one shot off her wishlist too. Don't know which one though. God, you write so hot and naughty. A girl after my own heart. Oh how I love the naughtiness. LOL
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on July 11, 2005
    THat was hott! He really needs the love! He doesn't get enough, just like another person I know and love ^_^ (snickers). Anyway, that was defintly an odd, yet sexy pairing! I can't wait for the second part!! Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2005
    oh soo evilllllll >.< don't stop here too long please!
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