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Reviews for Broken Luck

By : mistryl
  • From reamane21 on October 04, 2008
    Update plz i want to know what happen.
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  • From kittyblue on February 10, 2007
    O.O You... mean.. mean writer.. HOW CAN U END IT HERE????
    HOWWWW!!! Ç.Ç Please continue? Please, please, please!! =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2006
    ahhhhhh!!! plz update i love where thisis going. update soon ill be waiting for the next chap. ciao
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  • From ANON - pen pen on December 28, 2005
    holy crap dude that was awesome u have to update so i can see what will happen next!! i luv this story. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Lonely lust on December 19, 2005
    That's not fair. The chapter's over already? I really want to read more!! I can't wait. This is a really good peice of writing.
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  • From Cilla on November 02, 2005
    whoa How he know?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2005
    omg that was cooool!! plz update!! cant wait2 c what happens next ^_^
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  • From ANON - acidrain on October 10, 2005
    great chap. poor kurama as soon as he gets a piece of sweet yusuke he gets a spirit gun put to his stomach. update soon. ciao
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  • From ANON - Nekosune on October 01, 2005
    I loved it! Cookies and pocky for you! I'll give you yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - none on September 18, 2005
    evil.. evil... that chapter was like cooool dude. update i want to see wat happens next ^_^
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  • From ANON - Liz on September 10, 2005
    oh my god i can't believe that after all this time, you left it like that Please update..
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  • From ANON - vixenia on September 09, 2005
    Ooh now now, that last sentence was a bit naughty in a sort of sense. heh heh. me and my damn perverted mind. Anyways great chapter. update soon please. bai bai
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  • From RChan on September 09, 2005
    While I rather like the concept of your fanfic, it is rather jumpy... You move from scene to scene with out explain ing how it happens or putting in a page break. That make it a little confusing and hard to follow. Also you lack much information in the ways of relationships and how people begin to feel for one another and how they get together. I like your general idea here, but it could use a little more editing.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 08, 2005
    nice chapter though im kind of sad that kurama has to be arrested.
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  • From ANON - Amber on August 03, 2005
    Please update, please. This is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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