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By : Suryallee7104
  • From ANON - heather on October 08, 2008
    that was awsome. i really enjoyed your story. hiei was always my favorite character. you rock so much its halarious!!!!!!!
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  • From DeathFrost on January 18, 2008
    I love this story. It is absolutetly the greatest Hiei/Keiko story that I have ever read. Yeah. Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating it here!! :)
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  • From ANON - Sayge on January 06, 2007
    I really love this fanfic. The way you went about your words and storyline was pure genius. I never thought I would like this pairing, but it is as if I could watch this story intertwined with the episodes as naturally as you made it. The imagery you used in this piece was amazing. However, with this last chapter, there are many a gramatical error!! I was just letting you know. Other than that, I simply adore this fanfiction.

    Sincerely,
    Sayge
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  • From ANON - redroseinadarkalley on December 13, 2006
    i loved it alot! the true emotions that were displayed... very tasteful
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  • From ANON - Angel_eyes on August 04, 2006
    A nice comment as in, UPDATE SOON OR I SWEAR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN? Well, yeah I love this story. Love the pairing. And it wasn't like Kieko just ditched Yuskue. Poor Hiei had to wait, but it was worth it!! I so can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Lonely lust on December 22, 2005
    O Wow! I LOVE IT!! The story is really original. I personally would have never thought that Hiei and Keiko would be together, but here I am proven wrong! And they truly make a wonderful couple. I can't wait to read more so please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Rose on December 19, 2005
    Thought it was a great story. some of the grammar and spelling was off but l know english was not your frist lang. but its still good!! peace love and crabs and happy holidays!
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on October 21, 2005
    Blushes furiosely!
    Thanks, but I think the flowers belong, as always to my lovely Betas as such you are meant too!
    Without your lovely help and your nice reviews I would never have gotten so far!
    THANKS, TO TINA SAN, ALTAR SAN,( YES, YES, YES YOU TOO), AMANDA SAN, AND IN THE SHADOWS, FOR YOUR NICE HELP!!!
    A very happy Suryallee
    ps, you look up to me?????
    I look up to YOU!!!
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on October 21, 2005
    I am your 2000th hit Sury-san! Your grammar is doing much better than I've seen before and as always, I'm proud of you (actually I look up to you)! This makes me want to write a sequel to trembling! I just got to know how to start it... *passes out*
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  • From ANON - hieiyamimoya on October 16, 2005
    Oooo! Nice one! I just read the normal ff.net version and I must say I like this one better! That's a given though, right? Ahh, Isn't it nice to be able to give Hiei pleasure through writting? I'm even happier now! Maybe too happy... I should go calm down in a dark corner far away from any sign of life. *hugs Hiei plushie* ~grins devilishy~ I'm taking you with me...-_~ I like your art too! I just checked out your art account that you mentioned(right after I read the new chapter). I loved your nude pic of said koorime! *finds interest in the celing fan and wistles some random tune*hugs plushie tighter* I agree. The purple sheet does hide the best part! Err! Curses! And also, Hell! Why draw him topless when you can draw him completely clothesless! You should draw another one without the sheet. If you must hide his goods, use his hand. Oh well. Up to you. Hahaha!lol! I know, I'm very wierd. But everyone has a crazy side, don't they? Don't they?!?0_o? Mine chose tonight to visit... Ahh, the simple pleasures in life! Anyway, keep up the good work!

    Poor Hiei plushie in my hands:.......*gulps* "......help me...please....PLEASE!!!!" >0
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on September 28, 2005
    I know that I have problems, thats why I am working on it and thus that I will change them when I get them back from my beta.
    ( to the reader above)
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  • From ANON - Chiyo_Houshiko on September 28, 2005
    I really like the story it has a good plot, but you have major proof reading issues that a computer can't just fix. An example is the fact that you constantly use the word leaved and it should be 'left'. Sometimes the sentences are also phrased oddly like you need to switch the wording around. I hope you don't mind me telling you this and I hope you update your story soon.
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  • From ANON - miss kyoshi on September 23, 2005
    update NOW NOWW NOW NOW NOW NOW PLZ UPDTAE THE CHAPTER OSOON ITS SO SOS OS OS SO SSOS OS SOS OS Sos so SO SO SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD PLZ PLZPLZPZLPZLZLPZLPZLPZLPZLPZLPLZPLZPZLPZLPZPZLPZLPZPPZZPLPZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLPPLZplzPLZPlplZPlzplZPlzplZPLzplZPLzplplzPLplZPLzplZPLplzPLZZPLplzPLzpLPLZPLZPLZPLZplzPLZplplzPLPLZplpzlPLZplzPLZplzpPZLplzPLZplplPLZPLPLZPLPlplPZLplzPLZplZPLPLzplZ im begging u can u put a lemon in the next chapter plz I CANT WAIT I THINK IM GONG TO DIE FOR WAITINg
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  • From ANON - cassie on August 21, 2005
    you....you are mean....you are not suposed to leave it off like that....thats just torture right there *sigh* please keep the chapters cummin!
    P.S. i like you other stories to!
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  • From ryukotsusei on August 18, 2005
    Awesome, now he has her where he wants her now all it's going to take is that little push to convince her. I look forward to reading the next chapter, update soon please.
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