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Reviews for Mo-zoku Mating Season

By : koorinoinu
  • From Marikalay on May 09, 2007
    I hope you will forgive me if what I say seems rude.
    Your chapters are stunted and jerky. You seem to have only the loosest concept of grammar, all of your characters are very ooc - I don't mind a divergence from canon, but I do try to keep it IC - and your format isn't just difficult to read, it is almost impossible.
    I might have gone past Chapter 2 if it wasn't so much work to slog through for so little content.
    Once again, I hope you can forgive my rudeness and that my critique will help you with your future writings.
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  • From kitkit on May 04, 2007
    me like i would love to see little drabbles of the kids growing up..they seem so cute
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  • From ANON - Baka-san on December 20, 2006
    Loved the story, Kay-chan. I also read Sekia The Hanyou on mediaminer ^_^ They're both good. Post more stuff please. And e-mail me some good stories
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  • From ANON - Laesk Light on August 18, 2006
    a good story coming on here, i can not wait for more to be added.

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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 23, 2006
    wow im glad the kits are here and i say name one of the kits kouranue(sp)... you know after kurama old partner
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  • From ANON - nette on June 23, 2006
    about time you updated thought this story was a goner. okay how about hari, kai, and i can't think of none for 'y'. so good luck wit naming them and can't to read more.
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  • From ANON - kome on February 10, 2006
    awwwwwwwwwww this is so cute i love it
    oh my god please keep going i love
    it. i hate mood swings to including
    when your on your cycle god thats
    a pain in the ass i swear! but still
    keep going its so cute awwwwwww
    i can't wait to see how the kits are
    going to look.

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  • From ANON - kit-kit on February 03, 2006
    nice
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2005
    Prostitute? PROSTITUTE?
    Bwahahahahh!
    Moron. Either you don't understand basic anatomy or threw a hooker into the mix. Just a note: girls don't have prostates, and the prostate isn't a magical lovebutton either.
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  • From ANON - leeann on October 19, 2005
    please update soon. please send me the next chapter when you update.

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  • From ANON - Nekosune on October 07, 2005
    *snickers* Cool, yamyams for upating, cookies and pocky for awsomeness! More yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on October 06, 2005
    Jeez. Here we go. Another cliché of male-canon-character-turns-into-a-girl is that EVERYBODY is either in love with him/her or wants to fuck him/her. Get real. Please.

    I'm not sure about everyone else reading or reviewing this, but that makes me yawn big time. 'Sides, it seems like I am the only one sparing actual thought other than "lyk this!1! plz update!". That right there is annoying as hell.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 06, 2005
    nice i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Nekosune on October 05, 2005
    Woo! An update! Yamyams for you! Cookies and pocky for coolness! ^_^ More yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on October 04, 2005
    Dear god,

    These chapters are so short and dry, I feel as though I might starve.

    --The Green Knight

    P.S. No more hurricanes ever!
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