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By : mistryl
  • From ANON - Suryallee on December 16, 2005
    Aua!
    I hope he will overlife Yoko´s punishment, *Gulps*
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 16, 2005
    ooohhh nice
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on December 15, 2005
    I'm needing more please ^_^ Utterly sweet and funny. Ya gotta love Hiei and his antics. Now I'm really ready for some Yus/Kur loving.
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  • From ANON - Suryallee on December 12, 2005
    Then my last rev is also away. Well, I like the direction the story takes more and more!
    I really would love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on November 21, 2005
    I like it. But Makai is the realm not the creatures, they are called youkai or demon in English.

    Maikai - demon world
    Youkai - apparition/ demon
    Reikai - Spirit world
    Ningenkai - human world /living world
    Ningen - human
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 21, 2005
    wow i like it alot
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  • From on November 21, 2005
    Hey Katzztar I don't know if you will read this or not, but I am pretty sure Hiei does have telekinesis. When he is fighting Yusuke for the first time, he picks up the sword with his mind when it is on the ground and for almost a minute is flying in the air while Yusuke is levitated off the ground and thrown into a wall or box or something. Now I maybe be wrong but I am pretty sure that was Hiei's mind that did that and if it was then that is telekinesis.
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  • From ANON - jounochi rukawa on November 20, 2005
    I like your first writing but make it a little bit longer perhaps...... but good job
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on November 09, 2005
    I really like this. I'm a huge Yusuke/Kuwa fan, but I think I'll take Kuwa/Hiei into consideration, since it's my second fav pairing ^_^. I can't wait to see how those two will pair up Kurama/Yusuke ^_^. One question....who will be uke and who will be seme? ^_^; jus curious. Anyway, I will keep an eye out for this! Keep it going!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 04, 2005
    nice me like alot
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on November 04, 2005
    At the begining you show the difference between Hiei's telekenisis and Kuwabara's telekenisis.
    Now in the anime, they show in the final rounds of the Dark Tournament that Kazuma Kuwabara has telekinsis, when he uses that energy to grab the Trial Sword hilt that is on the ground behind Elder Toguro.
    I never seen Hiei with telekenisi. Neither in the anime or manga does Hiei use telekinsis, mind over matter.

    NOw in the Anmie and Manga it shows that Hiei does have Telepathy, ability to comunicate with the mind. The only instances were in the begining and ending of the series. In the begining, Hiei contacts Botan telepathically, demading the Orb and Mirror or he would hurt Kieko. In the ending, he is telepatically altering the memories of a random human that wandered into the Makai.

    Since you said 'speak' in front of both 'Hiei's telekenisis' and 'Kuwabara's telekensis' I'm assuming that you meant telepathy instead of telekensis.
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  • From ANON - vixenia on November 03, 2005
    Hiya. I loved the fic. Finally a good yusxkur fanfic. I have been looking for one all over. Hope to read more soon. bai bai. awesome plot by the way
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