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Reviews for Akambo

By : mhmartini
  • From 66Hiei08 on February 05, 2008
    Wow. I was a fan of your work even before I got brave enough to submit my first story. I will say, that chapter 13 needs fixed. But, geesh, I was worried about the length of some of my "scenes", lol. Lots of content in your chapters, but all good. :o)
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 25, 2007
    OOOOH! I'm so glad you updated. Kurama and Hiei are so wonderful together. You make them really compatable. You'll have to tell us when you write the new stories.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on May 22, 2007
    AND I FINALLY REVIEW! Yes, I know, I’m made of suck but I hope the gushing will make up for it.

    You have no idea how proud/amazed/slightly jealous I am of you for finishing 3 stories in this arc. And you did a Kurama/Hiei baby story without using an old trite plot device and/or mpreg. That alone brings you greatness.

    I loved this last chapter, how Shiori and Hatanaka told Kurama about their own experiences, so he could see that kids can cause problems in a relationship, and that he wasn’t alone. Also, Hiei putting the child on a schedule was very smart. I also didn’t know that you could hear the differences between the cries. Like I said in a previous review – you know so much about babies…almost too much. :D

    And do I need to say anything about the lemon? OF COURSE I DO – IT WAS HOT. I love the aggressive!Kurama and how fighting was foreplay. They are demons after all, and many authors forget that – you don’t.

    So, yeah, you own. Own everything. Love ya.

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  • From ANON - Lizzy*D on May 08, 2007
    I just read that whole story in one sitting, and it was worth it. This story progressed so naturally. I know have to go and read the first 2. Another day then. Your sooper, keep writing.
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon (not signed in) on April 25, 2007
    I think that River and Kisuke should be singers in a death metal band when they grow up. We can call it Screaming Babies, eh? ^__~

    His niece won't be a frozen bitch. Haha, I like that. Frozen bitch, makes me laugh for some reason.

    Okay, may have absolutely missed it somewhere in there, but did they ever realize the meaning of the gift from Shiori and Kazuya? (Because if they did, I didn't! T__T) Or perhaps that is the prompt for another story...?

    And regardless of what anyone else says, I think that leaving it with them going into the bedroom was a very un-blah ending!
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  • From ANON - Drisowen on April 23, 2007
    Ah, I love this story so much! I'm so happy that everything turned out well ^^ You really are an amazing writer. I mean... when I get to a point in a series where I can't agree with the true plot anymore, it begins to live in fic. Your universe for Yu Yu is what I generally think of as the perfect, and true world for it. So... I hope you keep writing, even if it's a little something here and there. Because if reviews are crack to you, your writing is some kind of heroine to me.

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  • From ANON - morgankit on April 23, 2007
    *high pitched squeal of delight likealittlefangirl*

    I have been patiently waiting and waiting and waiting for the completion of this fic and was THOROUGHLY SATISFIED. I love the easy leeway from when Kurama gets home to the very end when they make some beautiful (hard) love in the forest. Twice! Mind-numbingly beautiful. Gauh..

    God praise you my dear. *bows* I hope you continue with the arc, at least in the near future.

    - morgan
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on April 22, 2007
    I loved this, and it was just as well done as the other two fics in the arc! (Bugs is still my fave, though, lol!) ^_^ As always, the characterizations and plot line were supurb, and your writing style never fails to arrest my attention completely. Can't wait for the next companion fic -- it will most definetly be another winner! ^_~ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - ss_dragon_lady on April 22, 2007
    I totally loved this story. You did a wonderful job on it. I will be looking out for next story in this arc and I hope it will be in the near future. You are my favorite author and THE person who gave me the inspiration to write my Hiei and Kurama stories. Thanks so much for your wonderful stories, they are the best! Please put up another story when you get a chance. ^_^
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  • From hColleen on April 22, 2007
    Very nice ending. It makes sense that they'd have to reestablish their roles before everything could be okay again. And setting up a schedule with a baby is an excellent idea. Y'know, for not having kids, we sure know a lot. *grins* Anyways, lovely calm ending...gives you the feeling that things are going to be okay. Means you're tormenting them next, right? *grins*
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  • From ShioriFoxiesMom on April 22, 2007
    A happy ending is always a good ending. As usual you did an excellent job. It was cool that they didn't just kiss and make up. Having them reestablish their demon roles in their mating was perfect. I can't wait to see if you write another story where the kids are a little older but of course it wouldn't be a good story without more Hiei & Kurama yumminess.
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  • From ANON - Kerbear on April 22, 2007
    I thought it ended well,if not a little incompete(at least it felt that way)It was nice to see them have some problems with the new addtion to thier household.Not everything comes up roses where a baby is concerned.Neat way to handle it as well.It was great to see Hiei put even more trust in Shiori with the baby and him and his mates issues.I can't wait to see what else you've got up your sleeve for them.Very nice job
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  • From 279180 on April 22, 2007
    That was amazing. I love it, it was really good. I'm content. For now. Well Luck on your writings, i bet they'll be amazing.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on April 11, 2007
    Yes, I know I'm a whore for not reviewing sooner, but you know the deal.

    This....this is what I love about your writing. You very slowly weave the words around us so that we don't notice how bad things have gotten for our two demons until it's BAD. This plot, if written by anyone else, would come out trite or fangirlish, but you execute it beautifully. Everytime Hiei tends to their child, I can see his past haunting him. And Kurama's quiet resentment is painful, almost as painful as the the interuppted lemon.

    I like how since Kurama's a kitsune, he's very nasty about sharing his mate, even if it's with their child. And Hiei is so scared to repeat his past that he isn't going to listen to reason. Wonderful. I hope I see more of this soon.
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  • From ANON - lunar_eclipse24 on April 03, 2007
    I really love the thought you put into this. Most fics that have babies in them forget that babies eat and poop alot. I also like how you're working with the fact that having a kid puts a lot of strain on a relationship. Or so I've heard, anyway. I can kinda see both sides of this argument. Kurama is beginning to care for the baby, but still wants quality time with Hiei. Hiei wants to be a good parent and give the baby the love and attention he never got as a child. I hope Shiori smacks enough sense into the two of them for them to realize that what they want isn't mutually exclusive.

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