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By : ss_dragon_lady
  • From ANON - Angel_eyes on September 20, 2006
    Oh, my god. Poor Kurama. And Hiei to find the man he loves in that condition. That's terrible!! But you wrote it out really well. I was completely absorbed in the story. A coulple of your chapters here have brought me close to tears, and that's not easy to do. Good job, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on September 17, 2006
    Oh my gd,how could you end it there!. Whats going to happen to their youngest he is out in the open behind a tree and ripe for capture.I was on the edge of my seat and than.... the chapter ended.Ouch,so both teams know of at least part of the enemy and wow the sayions(sp?) children fight right beside the parents.Blood and gore all around.Nice family time.Poor Kurama must be really bad good thing Yusuke came with Hiei even if thry wouldn't want him to see them in bad shape.Please update soon (a couple days)can't wait
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  • From ANON - nette on September 16, 2006
    update soon update soon update soon. you must update soon. this story is getting too good. and poor kaihei if only if the believed in his ablities then he would be a top notch figther like his fathers and brother. i hope by the end he finds out that he is just as a strong as they are. and what about kurama. i don't think i want to know what he looks like, if he is in any worse condition than what hiei was, then i don't think i could handle it. anyway update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Panda-chan on September 16, 2006
    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT !! Did I mention that I love your story? Please update soon!! Your the only Yu Yu author I read!HEARTS!!
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  • From ANON - Firekeeper727 on September 16, 2006
    I love this story! And I wanted to say that I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed before. When I found this story it was already on the twentieth chapter... and then I was just waiting to see how fast you would update. Sorry again, but I guess better late than never... right? Well, I can't wait til the next update... make it soon, ne? Keep it up, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - XxBatsxX on September 16, 2006
    aw ;o; poor Kurama.... But damn this is gonna be be one hell of a battle xDDD and that bitch Muruko's there too! HAHAHA!! That's messed up/funny that she's there, she can sure hold a grudge xDDD HAHAHAHA!!! I cant wait for the next Chapter dude =D I've been crazy about this one all week, and for the one coming up i'm gonna have ants in my pants =3 Whooooooo~
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  • From ANON - Skwishee on September 16, 2006
    Ah the suspense T__T You love to kill people with cliffhangers don't you. I hope you update soon or I'm gonna freak out waiting XDDD
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  • From ANON - tala ishter on September 10, 2006
    wow i did see that coming. well you have to update is soon. i hope that the two kids made it safe to the group. at the sametime i hope that kurama is ok
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  • From ANON - XxBatsxX on September 10, 2006
    xDD Yomi's a real Bastard in your fics, Hahaha Thats effin crazy that he came back, though i had a feeling that jerk would, there wasnt really that many options besides an OC. I cant wait for the next chapter ^o^ Whooo~ a week is to long xD
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on September 09, 2006
    Wow,what a chapter,I guess I should've known it was Yomi yet that was a surprise.Poor Kurama having to go through this all over again.And where did the kids go?He gave them a portal but it didn't have to be for home.Wait till Hiei finds out who it is( oh boy)is blood going to fly.Yet Yomi with robot limbs how to fight that,what about Hiei's old boss she was part robot(wasn't she)I'm glad Yusuke and the others will get a shot at helping out to.This should be good! Very nice job.
    Update soon please, even though you just did this is good and its hard to wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - XxBatsxX on September 05, 2006
    NoOoOoOoOoOoO!~!~! ;o; AHHHHHHH!!!!!! That was so sad.... I have to know what it is that is going to happen in this fic T-T its tearing me apart....
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  • From ANON - Angel_eyes on September 04, 2006
    Wow...Just wow. I can't believe Kurama actually went... That's not fair!! And I love Hiei's plan even if it didn't quite work out!! But, I know everything will be alright...I hope....I'm almost begging....No, I'm really begging because Kurama dying would tear Hiei apart and he went through the trouble of getting pregnant again, so that wouldn't be fair. And, it would tear the boys apart too. Losing a parent....
    So yes, I'm am begging, hopeing, even praying(and i don't usually pray for something like this) that everything will turn out alright...But...if this is like most good stories, which it is, we wont get the outcome for atleast two chapters...Well, I'm waiting!! Chop-chop!
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  • From ANON - nette on September 03, 2006
    i can't believe you had him leave, after all that he still decided to go. poor hiei, my heart goes out to him and toushi. especially what hiei 'conspired' to do. man, this just made me feel helpless. i hope kurama will be all right. i hope once this story is over that things will be a little more peaceful for them all. i wonder what the saiyans will do when they hear that kurama left. update soon.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on September 02, 2006
    I feel a payback coming on,but does there really have to be heart ache as well?And what about the sayons(sp?) they have a stake in this to.I really hope Yusuke and Kewa come to help with this(they'll be needed to keep Hiei from killing everything that moves).Well I'm on the edge of my seat with this and a little sad as well.Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Tori on September 02, 2006
    You're mean, you made me cry!
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