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Reviews for Eye of the Beholder

By : KyoHana
  • From lauren44386 on July 05, 2009
    This is such a good story. One of the best I've read. Please update soon.
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  • From mhmartini on January 28, 2009
    I don't think I ever read past chapter two of this one in the past. I have no idea why I didn't; I'm absolutely enchanted. Somehow you've found my two favorite things (okay, I'm counting Hiei and Kurama as ONE thing, and the setting as the other) and combined them perfectly. Your style of writing is also perfect for the setting. Your word choice fits the story wonderfully.

    I do hope your muse decides to inspire the next chapter soon; I'm kind of dying to see what happens next.
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  • From 66Hiei08 on January 15, 2009
    I must say, I'm finding this to be a very nice, well-worded twist on the beautiful story of "Beauty and the Beast". Although I've been known to "torture" the little guy in some of my writings I hardly consider him a beast, but it works for this story, lol. It wouldeth pleaseth me if thou wouldst but update soonest. I thank thee. :o)
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  • From scarletobsession on August 15, 2007
    I NEED another chapter!!! Oh this is so good, I am wiggling in my chair with excitedment! ....wait... -_- That didn't sound right. But STILL!!! More please and thank you.
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  • From ShioriFoxiesMom on August 15, 2007
    I'd forgotten about this story. I'm glad you updated. As expected the beast seems to be taken with the beautiful Kurama. I can't wait for more. Update soon.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 14, 2007
    And in exchange, you will agree to remain here – as my companion – for the remainder of your natural life.

    *Jumps on Hiei* OK, I'M IN!

    I love the way you're writing this, it's like old school fable with a fantasy twist, everything from the pattern of speech to the setting flows with it. Wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next, Hiei doesn't know what he's in for.
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  • From scarletobsession on August 04, 2007
    Another masterpiece!!!! Wow please, oh please update this one too soon? Please?
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  • From BlueUtopiah on March 06, 2007
    You know...I bet Hatanaka is going to have to make some kind fo deal for defiling that rose bush...like giving our little black-cloaked figure (Hiei) his stepson.

    I love period pieces. I used to read fantasy all the time and this AU makes me feel like I'm coming home.
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  • From ShioriFoxiesMom on February 28, 2007
    Good chapter. I can't wait for this to move along though and have Kurama meet his beast. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on January 07, 2007
    Hey, an update! Not altogether too interesting, but undoubtedly necessary to move the story along, so I won't complain. Update quickly.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on May 18, 2006
    This is so cute. I'm glad aff finally let me in so that I could read it! First off, I love the setting, I read too many fantasy novels not to love the setting. I also like the tone in which you tell the story, you use great words like "braggart" which keep it running right alongside the setting. I can't wait to see how you write Hiei.

    And your description of Keiko was awesome.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on May 14, 2006
    Very nice. I like period pieces, though I've not the patience to work through the grammar/verbage...or at least not keep it up through a story. I look forward to seeing where it goes :D Yays :D
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  • From ANON - Josie on April 14, 2006
    This is really good. I mean REALLY good. I love the style and I love that its not another beauty and the beast parody thats making fun of Kuwabara. Please write another chapter soon. Like now soon? Please? Maybe? Yes?
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