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Reviews for Caught in the Arms of the Wind

By : VixenzxMasqueradex
  • From ANON - vincent on June 11, 2013
    Oh my gosh! Finding YusukeXJin is impossible and you rocked at it. Everytime Jin spoke I heard his adorable accent in my head. It's great and I am only done with the first chapter. You rock!
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  • From kitkit on December 01, 2008
    love it
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  • From 66Hiei08 on November 25, 2008
    Great story!! i read every chapter with eagerness!!
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  • From psycicfox on November 25, 2008
    I've been following this story for... a year and a half I think... yeah, that sounds about right. Anyway, I've always loved this story (and you're other one for that matter), and I love the way you ended it. I think if you are up to it, a sequal would be awesome, but that's a bit of a stretch, trust me, I know how big of a bite that is. Anyway just a couple of things I noticed, in both your stories actually, you had a couple typos, not anything bad, just a bit annoying when you have to go back and reread it. You might want to get a beta if you don't already and if you do, you might want to go over it again after getting it back. Let's see... I think that was all I wanted to say in the critique area, so I just wanted to thankyou for writing an awesome fic. You're fic got me into Mpregs, and it turns out for some odd reason I like them, so thanks. Can't wait to see what you come up with next (although if you can I hope you finish Vixen, I really really do.)
    Sorry for any typos in this, you can imagine how heavily I rely on my beta.
    Have a happy holiday! (and happy thanksgiving if you're in America.... God this review turned out MUCH longer then I thought it would be...sorry 'bout that.)
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on November 24, 2008
    *takes a deep breath* yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! *catches breath*
    ok, luved the ending, it fits perfectly and awww they had a set of twins awesome. now since this beauty of a fic is complete, how bout u work on my fav missy -,- ^^ it is only fitting ^^ three thumbs up m/^^m/ ^^
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  • From ANON - kerbear on November 24, 2008
    Just promise there'll be more about them .A sequel maybe? MMm,please.
    Great story,I didn't want it to end
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  • From ANON - nette on October 09, 2008
    omg finally after ten thousands years ^^ and thanks for the shout ^^. awwwwwwwwww jin and yusuke are finally together, bout damn time too *nods* and yes i enjoyed every bit of it and sorry my review is so late, school and life is a bitch. but yes better be an epilogue or im gonna cry. i wanna see Oops when he older and running his fathers ragged lol. so EPILOGUE EPILOGUE, or at least a pt 2. cant leave it hanging luv XD
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  • From ANON - kerbear on September 26, 2008
    Though you need help with some of the spelling.Its a great story and I almost don't want it to end.
    There's so much more you could delve into,I really hope there's a sequel to this story.
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  • From kitkit on September 26, 2008
    lovely chapter, no offense to any keiko lovers, but i hope she's not pregnant, even though that would make a good sequel. i also hope that yusuke can become pregnant, so that they can have more kids safely. beside it would be totally funny to see yusuke pregnant. i think in a odd way he would make a good mom, a little rash at times, but a good mom.
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  • From ANON - mikomi on September 26, 2008
    such a great stroy! i followed it for a bit and was hooked! i loved the keiko bashing!! sometimes she deserves it!

    great work or art!

    laters! ~_^
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  • From kitkit on August 01, 2008
    love the chapter, im glad oops is back with yusuke and jin
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  • From kerbear on July 13, 2008
    The last chapter was great.Yusuke a daddy and lovin it,JIn seems to finally feel like he is home.Yet with the
    shanobi still out there there can't be to much time to relax and I can't wait to see how jin reacts to Kakio(sp?)After all he must protect his man from the big mean human.lol,Plus Hiei was a great big help Kurama has to thank him properly.Can't wait for the next chapter and am really hoping it isn't as long a wait as this one.
    Great job
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  • From 66Hiei08 on July 13, 2008
    Thanks for the long-awaited update! I'm very much into this story. Chapter 10 needs fixed, though. But keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kay Cunningham on February 29, 2008
    I love this story and I can't wait 2 see wat happens next please update soon.
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  • From psycicfox on February 27, 2008
    Once again you did a wonderful job on the chapter. I saw a couple of typos, so you might want to get a beta, even though I am totally not one to talk when it comes to typos. I think everyone is still written in character (which I can be anal about at times), and in a story like this, I know how difficult that can be. Thank you so much for putting up another chapter, all though please, please don't make me wait that long again! I really, really like this fic, so post whenever you get the chance!
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