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Reviews for Dreams of Decadence

By : ryukotsusei
  • From ANON - Nikatsin on August 11, 2006
    Err, forgot to leave the email! *sweatdrops*
    `Tis simply Nikatsin@yahoo.com, `n I'm very sorry for the needless double-review!
    *runs*
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  • From ANON - Nikatsin on August 11, 2006
    Wow. Just... wow. Excellent fuel for one of my most favorite pairings through out all anime and manga, and over-all OTP for Yu Yu Hakusho! You would probably ask why I rated it so low, though. I rated it at a three simply because of all the spelling and grammar mistakes, some of which looked as though they could be fixed with a quick proof-reading. Other than that, your writing flows elegantly and naturally, and the smut left me in dire need of a cold shower (*sneezes and dies*). I find that the story was neither too short, nor too long. Although it begs for another chapter or two, as it'd be interesting to see how all of the others take their relationship, and how it plays out when one factors in these new, unknown enemies. Said enemies being the main reason I think the story could use continuation from the point that you left off, but like I said; This one can easily stand on it's own.

    Having said that, I would happily correct my former rating to a five, if you were willing to let a Beta-reader take a look at it. In fact, I'd volunteer to do it myself, if only you'd have me (No innuendoes intended.) For that purpose, I've left my email. I'd hate for such a wonderful fiction's ratings to be so substandard, considering how extremely good the actual material is.

    Hugs and luffs! *gives joined-at-the-hip Hisuke plushie and flees the scene*

    ~Nika
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 22, 2006
    You know I read this twice right? Like, in a row. Kurama had me in stiches. "had everything well in hand" almost made me pop laughing - you write a very in character Kurama, something that I find hard to do.

    I have to say, I agree with KHL, you come up with some very original and twisted plots, and I love it. Your one shots are the bomb. So many things I liked about this: Hiei feeding Yusuke his ki, the 3 different dream/not dream segments, the fact that Hiei had saved Yusuke's life those two times and you built on that. Oh yeah, and the sex was hot too. There's something about a vocal wanton Hiei that makes me sweat.

    Nice job, I really enjoyed this.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 20, 2006
    wow i guess the third time is the charm.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in) on July 20, 2006
    That was great! I'm so glad that I waiting until today to read this. I was so tired last night that I would not have appreciated it as much. I have to say that once again, you've thought up another original senerio. I don't know how you do it. You're so creative. Damn, those dreams were hot. And Hiei and Yusuke are so damn sexy. I almost think that Hiei and Yusuke make the better pairing.... Almost. I'm still a die hard Kurama/Yusuke girl, but damn if Hiei and Yusuke don't make hotter than hell fuck partners, lol. You really managed to keep all characters in character too. I especially loved Kurama's dialogue and thoughts. They were so cute and funny. I really loved this one. Thanks for the great read!
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in) on July 20, 2006
    Hey girl, I just saw that you've posted another story, yay you! I haven't read this one yet cause it's 2am. I was just doing a quick scan to see what I should read tomorrow and found this. About the problem with the formatting stretched way out, I noticed that you have a squiggle line about half way through the fic separating part of the story. That's the problem. You have to go into your document and delete at least half of that squiggle line. I think the reason that happens is because that squiggle line is one continuous line with a no spaces, so the computer doesn't know to wrap the text. That's not a very technical explanation, I know. I'm not a technical person, but I've had that happen to me and that's what someone told me to do and it worked. So give it a try. Just delete half that curly line and any other curly lines you may have. I usually use stars as a border, but only twenty of them as a rule. Otherwise I'd have the same problem with the text stretching out too far.

    I'll read this fic tomorrow and then review, K. I've read your other fics that you've recently posted, but I'm way behind on reviews, sorry. Look for reviews from me sometime tomorrow. ^_^
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