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Reviews for Hiei's Dragon

By : cienne
  • From SnowKaneko on March 30, 2007
    Awwww... I was really hoping Kurama would get to win this one but oh well... *pouts* I loved the story any way and the original storyline made it all the more interesting. I guess you can't win them all.

    "Just keep on dancing!" *pulls out marachas from nowhere and starts dancing*-from HanaKimi.

    Snow

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  • From BlueUtopiah on February 19, 2007
    You finally updated this! *dances*

    The Kurama/Hiei/Dragon threesome is the shit. Poor Hiei never had a chance against those two, and although I did like the Hiei/Ryuu pairing, I felt bad for Kurama at the end of the story. Hopefully he went to Yusuke's to get some love.

    All in all, a good story, the plot was something I'd never seen before and the sex was damn hot.
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  • From ANON - kurochan on December 04, 2006
    EEEee!!!

    Go Kurama!!! Teach 'em!!!

    Poor 'rama's heartbroken.....
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  • From ANON - me on October 21, 2006
    WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (very awesome chappie!!!)
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on October 17, 2006
    Ooh threesome! Yays! Can't wait for the next part! ^__^
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  • From ANON - XxBatsxX on October 15, 2006
    xD I love this part, “This happens when you put two ignorant virgins together.” HAA HAA HAA HAHAHA!!! xDDD I died when i read that! ^o^ Whoooo~ nice changes with the fic, it gives it a past and details to start out on The Dragons and Hiei relationship. =D
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  • From ANON - Niiro_Yuuyake on October 15, 2006
    *cheers* I loved that chapter. Wonder if Kurama has something up his sleeves? Or is he just trying to get Hiei in bed? Or relly trying to help them out? So many choices, only one way to find out...UPDATE!! PLease. And do it soon!


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  • From ANON - Yamistar on October 15, 2006
    Ahhh! You must continue!!! I need to know what comes next! But wow, I'd never expect the Rlack Dragon to be so....stupid. Sad, virgins *shames* You'd think he would know better. *sigh* Gotta have a perverted, pissed off Youko show you how it's done. That's too funny. Again, I love your writing style, and I hope to see more of your stories.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on October 14, 2006
    I'm really enjoying this story. I actually went back and re-read the first two edited chapters and you really added a lot to them! I find myself liking Ryuu and how much he cares for Hiei, and I like that Hiei was resistant at first but does it anyway because he wants the gentleness. But the Kurama thing? Where he's going to teach Ryuu how to pleasure Hiei? How do I sign up for that?

    I hope you continue this - it's my favourite story on aff right now.
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  • From ANON - Death Note on October 14, 2006
    Lol I think Kurama's up to something....Ryuu is like a little kidd. UPDATE Quickly!
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  • From ANON - akume on October 13, 2006
    Wow! A threesome. I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Niiro _Yuuyake on October 11, 2006
    My, my, my...I'm absolutely loving this. Like seriously. I just love how Ryuu is...even if he is a bit young-mentally, that makes him all the more interesting and innocent. And oohh! I can't wait to see the drama unfold with Ryuu and Kurama over Hiei...I actually had an idea like this, but it was Youko vs. Kurama(shuichi) over Hiei, but Hiei only wanted Kurama(not the demon Kurama), so Youko was like 'I'lltake him anayway'. But I ahven't had time to type the fic, and now, I won't need too...I have your fic, which is, so far, sounding better and better by the chapter...

    Update soon, please!
    P.S.-Poor Hiei...perhaps he should suggest(or buy, somehow) some lube for Ryuu...Also, I would gladly beta for you, but just so you know, I don't have Microsoft Word, so I'll have to use my cheaper version os MW...either way, I didn't find too many errors(if any) in this chapter...you're doing fine(Great!) without a beta...keep up the work..amatuer or not, this is fabulous!!
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  • From ANON - akume on October 11, 2006
    I like how your story is progressing so far, though I do hope Ryuu finally gets the picture that he's hurting Hiei. Well, until next time.
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  • From ANON - XxBatsxX on October 10, 2006
    aw, poor Hiei, he cant get off with Ryu ;o;... Has he even reached puberty in your fic ._.?
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  • From ANON - The w00t Girl on October 10, 2006
    It's lovely, really, thought sometime Hiei or Ryuu, need to realize that he isn't supposed to bleed, hehe.
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