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Reviews for Undercover Operations

By : ryukotsusei
  • From sestrilla on June 04, 2008
    i just love this story i keep comeing back to it
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  • From ANON - 300Spartans! on March 05, 2008
    Damn...wish you'd update this story. It's absolutely fabulous.
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  • From sestrilla on January 19, 2008
    this is an amazing story please keep going this is to good to let go!
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  • From ANON - Nightwatcher on July 30, 2007
    I really hope you update this story. It's one of the best I've seen on this site.
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  • From Animefreak242 on July 24, 2007
    I like the idea of you doing a compliment to Kimi-san's story, 'Undercover Cases'. I'm anxious to see how this will continue and just what the outcome will be.
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  • From BloodyLove on February 25, 2007
    This is off to a very good start. I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - Kit on December 27, 2006
    Wow! Very good. Could you let me know when you update? You're characterization of them is so close to seeming flawless. Keep up the awesome work. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Eh? on November 30, 2006

    Very interesting work, I thought you handled the aspects of the master/slave relationship well.

    Wish to see more.
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  • From ANON - Okay on November 30, 2006
    Wonderful start, can't wait til the fighting begins. Keep up the good work. Also, I've noticed that some people cannot read author notes. I've seen this story also on another site, though I've only found the counter part on AFF. Stupid people bitch about not seeing enough Kagome/Kurama. HELLO! It's in the other author's part. If she were to go further she'd be stepping on the other author's toes. Pffft. Glad I don't write or I'd get really pissed at the ignorance of some of these reviewers.
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  • From ANON - Kahty on November 29, 2006
    Not bad. The story concept has merit. The characters actions are believable, though I would have expected more out of Kurama's character. But then again neither he or Kagome are the main focus of the story and under such circumstances its perfectly understandable. You did forget one thing though. Hiei's natural eye color is red. So it was a bit confusing when you said his eyes were tinged pink (due to arousal). Perhaps it would have been better to say "the whites of his eyes were tinged pink." Otherwise I have no complaints. I am eager to see future chapters.
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  • From ANON - Saharah on November 28, 2006
    I. LOVE. it.

    Please, PLEASE continue with the story - you have a wonderful, inticate plot going and it's only chapter one!
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on November 27, 2006
    This is such a great idea I like the intertwining of stories. You write Hiei so very well It is positivly yummness to the 10th degree. I'm looking forward to a little whoop ass in the fights tommorow. It would be interesting to see Youko vs. Hiei as Hiei was all hot to trot in the Miakia tournament with Youko, he's got a real hard on for getting a change to finally fight him. I would love to see how you would handle that:)
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  • From ANON - SpikedStar on November 26, 2006
    oh, and i love the little thing about Botan having to buy batteries frequently, that made me smile. Keep up the good work.

    p.s. It's a shame Botan didn't wear that blue mesh shirt. I woulda love'd to see that...or read it
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  • From ANON - SpikedStar on November 26, 2006
    In the last few months, you and Kimisan have written some great fics, most of which contain my favorite couple. I can't wait to see how this fills out, it's already great. Update soon!
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