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Reviews for DEMON DESIRES

By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From wyntermist70 on May 04, 2009
    wow where in the world do u get your ideas that was the best freakin story write on girl keep'em coming lol
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  • From inuren on December 15, 2008
    Thank you for that story I loved it, I hope you have more on te site
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  • From ANON - RaiL on April 25, 2007
    Wow. This is really one incredibly hot story! I'm sorry for not reviewing after every chapter. I must admit the pull of the "Next Chapter" button was too great. Brilliantly written. I could never imagine a KXHXY until I read yours, props for that! I definitely can't wait to read the rest of your stories. Thank you so much for taking the time to write and post this one.
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  • From zsfantasy on March 06, 2007
    I finally finished reading demon desires and I loved it. Absoultely 100% adored it. You made the three seem really beliveable in their relationship, and I have to wonder just how many kids there will be for them. I must say that I wouldn't mind seeing a sequal to this story...(hint hint).

    Thank you for posting this wonderful story! I throughly enjoyed it.
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  • From zsfantasy on March 05, 2007
    chapter 5 and 6

    Wow, that is defintely one way to bring trio together. I think that you did a good job on showing Yusuke's grief especially with the condition of the house. Hiei, hiei, hiei, he is so cute in these chapters, first with bonding and taking care of kyo and then wanting to cuddle with Yusuke in the bed, in the kitchen, or anyplace he can get his hands on him! I loved it! I especially loved the part where Hiei thought of Kyo by making him is very own room in the tree house. I love hiei in this role. I normally go for him being more dominate, but he is wonderful in this role as well.

    Great job with the characterizations!!!
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  • From zsfantasy on March 04, 2007
    chapter 3 and 4

    Have I told you enough times that I love your stories? Well, Demon Desires is no exception. I thought that it was very considerate of Mukuro to wait until Hiei and Kurama were finished before knocking on the door, and really her request wasn't out of bounds...please keep it down so people can sleep. You had me laughing for a while with that.

    You developed the tension between Hiei and Yuskue fairly well. I wonder how everyone will come together in the end. It is obvious that Yusuke still loves Keiko, so what happens for them to break up...mmmm something to think about.

    I do believe that I liked the surprised and upset Shiori, only because in the end she accepted Kurama's demon side. But it added a little spice to the story and made you wonder for a bit if Shiori would ever become accepting of her son.

    I am really enjoying this story and through all of that rambling I just wanted to say...Thanks for the great read!!
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  • From zsfantasy on March 04, 2007
    Ch2

    You put Yoji in their! Yoji is my favorite guy from Weiss and I was surprised and pleased to see him make an appearance. There were lots of things that I liked about this chapter such as Kurama being so kind in drawing Hiei a bath that would take away all the pains (wink, wink) and then Hiei relaxing and trusting Kurama to take care of him. That was just so cute!!! I really enjoyed how Kurama tricked Hiei into attending a party. And I must say the plot thickens when Yusuke threatens Hiei.

    Overall, this was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From zsfantasy on March 04, 2007
    Chap 1

    Mmmm...looks like this fic is going to be interesting. I like how you incorporated the end of the anime with the beginning of your story. It really gives your story a solid background. Also, I am intrigued by the idea of the threesome...hopefully from your clues we will see a bit of Yusuke with Kurama and Hiei. Off I go to read some more. :)
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  • From Staphanie on January 15, 2007
    i think the story is going great. i wish you would update some time soon, unless your done which i would really hate for it to be, or unless stuff came up which means your just being delayed which is ok also.:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2007
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  • From ANON - cat on January 14, 2007
    I really feel sorry for Keiko's parents. I know they are virtually non entities in the anime, but they existed, and they have lost their daughter, and their son in law has taken their only grandchild to the Makai (about which they haven't a clue so they don't even know if their grandchild is safe) but still... Kurama's mom gets to see their grandchild and they (and Yuske's mom) don't get anyone to love. It is really very sad.
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  • From ANON - lijana on January 14, 2007
    Okay, I have reached chapter4 of this fic and I am loving it.


    When I read Shiori's reaction I just had to comment ^^ To me this is one of the most realistic reactions I have read for her towards the 'truth' So thank you for that.

    I love the little demon culture you have added and I look forward to K/H/Y!!!!

    You have given the K/H relationship an interesting angle and I am eager to continue reading.
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  • From ANON - steph8503 on January 14, 2007
    Hey please write more. its such a good story along with all the other ones and i just can't get enough so please write more or i might kill my self of boredom cause your the only person that accually updates there stuff at the same time every day of the week.
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  • From ANON - shuuichi on January 12, 2007
    aww.. so cute! I wish it was longe though!they make such a cute three some with such a cute lil baby! I really hope you will get inspiration to do more ^^ Preggors hiei will be cute! and then cute lil babeh! I wonder what he will look like.. or she!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 12, 2007
    See, the problem with aff is the lack of reviews. Sure they're not as plentiful as ff.net, but you do get a few devoted followers. I don't think that this site ever really recovered from their blackout earlier this year.

    That being said, I'm really glad you posted this story here, this one was made for aff. And I read it again and again, this really is my favourite. I don't know how you do it, but you write the hottest sex scenes without being graphic, which is something I can't do. And you managed to get Keiko out of the picture without bashing her, which I like.

    I'm really happy that you're posting here.
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