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Reviews for Growth of a Spirit Detective

By : azalea
  • From silverysora on January 15, 2009
    Wow....as always you deliver on the lemons. The threesome between our favorite demon boys was absolutely delicious.
    You had me laughing at parts in this chapter as well, what with yusuke being thrown in the lake and all. xDD
    An overall excellant chapter. Thanks for the update~
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  • From kanezu on January 14, 2009
    Thank you for the wonderful update! I am glad they are finally getting some of Yusuke's problems resolved. I continue to love your story, thank you for not wishing to abandon your excellent work.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 13, 2009
    This was seriously freaking hot. Like, a brain melting chapter...which I read twice. You are a sweetheart for the dedication, a real sweetheart. Thank you so much!

    First off, the gore in that dream sequence, especially where Yusuke's rips her cheek out, was lovely. I don't get enough gore in fanfic and it's wonderful to see something that is gut twisting. Very vivid. Then, Yusuke running again, yet he can't run away from himself, was beautifully done.

    Then there's the sex. Hiei doing something to Yusuke while Kurama is trying to get him to promise was hysterical. Especially Hiei with the half-grin and the fang. And the sex was dripping hot, as usual. The positions and the rimming and Kurama being all: We're not going to let you come....yeah, I slid out of my chair.

    I think I laughed harder than Hiei when Kurama flung Yusuke into the hot spring. And you had them spar! You made Yusuke and Kurama spar! FOR THE WIN.

    And that last scene, between Kurama and Yusuke really did me in. I dunno, I think that might have been hotter than the threesome, I mean, guh. AND KURAMA PULLS A BEETLE OUT OF YUSUKE'S HAIR. HAHAHAHAHA.

    Also: that last line about Kurama wanting to talk to Houkeshin while he smells like sex with Yusuke had me laughing too. I love you so hard for this.
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  • From LadyLaran on January 11, 2009
    Great story and I'm glad you updated. I wonder when Yusuke will return the mating marks?
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  • From NAnderson on January 10, 2009
    ok, but i get to name atleast 1 ^^ Ive always liked Xzona and Raindrop (mainly because I have a niece named Indiarain)so I would like to have at least 1 of those in there somewhere lol. And I was reading ur review responses, and I realized something. Im 1 of those people that beg 4 updates and then makes u feel guilty 4 not updating sooner... that being said... UPDATE SOON >.< I demand it!!!!!! lol XD I kid I kid, BUT now on to my chapter review!! Again a morvelious job has been done... I think I may have liked to see yuske fight harder and then have him tied up b4 they had their fun at the spring XD but thats just me lol. But I love every other aspect of this chapter in the story. And what was that o.0 ??? OVER????? So soon???!!!! NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! *sigh* it makes me sad, but as they say all good things must come to an end i suppose, im still looking forward to the next chapter anyway ^.^ and once again my review has grown out of my own control so im stopping now...
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  • From yaoihentai69 on January 10, 2009
    omg! yummeh! XD And you had me laughing hysterically when Kurama found that beetle in Yusuke's hair. heheh Also, I just love how great you are at making everything so visual to me. The dreams are like, wow. It's awesome. ^o^

    Only two updates left?! -cries- I'm pretty sure I'll have a panic attack or something whenever I finish reading the epilogue....before going back to chapter one. XD
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  • From ANON - Kitsune on January 10, 2009
    YOu have answered my prayers and gien me more Yusuke/Hiei/Kurama goodness! I'm glad you were able to update again. Your style is very impressive, and you are able to keep everyone in character. I can't wait for your next update, though I will be sad when this story is completed. Post soon, okay?
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  • From DuosAngel on January 09, 2009
    Aww, I don't want this to be almost over. Still, once it's over, I can come back a re-read my favorite parts over and over.
    Great lemons in this chapter btw.
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  • From ANON - zing on January 05, 2009
    OMG! I really like your story, all the emotional upheaval and gruesome scenes, my type of story. Keep up the good work and can't wait til the next chappie
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  • From Amanewildfire on December 08, 2008
    AH!! I love this story! So well written and so much going on. I can't help but crave more.
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  • From ANON - Marikalay on November 15, 2008
    Your work remains a joy to read, and one that is well worth waiting for. I look forward to your next installment, knowing that anticipation and patience will make it all the more rewarding.
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  • From ANON - rose on October 29, 2008
    I can not put into words how excited I was after I realized that you had updatted. This story is so well written and so hot!! Please update again because you will make my day.
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  • From ANON - Kitsune on October 27, 2008
    Frankly, for a while, I was afraid that this was a dead story. I found it one day, I thought, "Wow, this is good! I wish there was more. At last, you have fulfilled that wish. But an we get to the point where Yusuke works through his issues and allows hiimself to be fucked again I liked that part a lot. By the way, typing with one hand is extremely difficult.
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  • From NAnderson on October 27, 2008
    on a personal note- i would totally have ur babies XD lol and on a story related note- aawwwww that was so sweet and yet so funny. reading this chapter left me to fight with the desires to smack smack our little detective or to tell him to fun faster so the demons will give chase lol !!! not only did u meet my hope but then u even went as far as to pass them! I loved how hiei was all "take it as fact or u will b taking me in a place u may not want right now!" yum demon bondage best thing in the world lol. well it was a long wait 4 this chapter so im DIEING 4 the next one! *gives big fox kit eyes* PLEASE post the next chapter 4 this amazing story soon!
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  • From kanezu on October 27, 2008
    Thank you so much for updating. I am glad my review meant so much. I love that they are starting to work on being a trio, even if Yusuke is a bit reluctant.
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