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Reviews for The essence of smell.

By : Lucilin
  • From justice05 on October 16, 2007
    I really like your fic, but that should have some how let all guys or someof the guys stay in the spirt world. But no yaoi between each of the guys.Just Botan/all of the spirt team.But if that's not going to happen at lease let karuma need vist koeama for some reason, then after that runs into botan in the halls and is effected by her, then karuma/botan action happens. Which in the middle of it he transforms into yoko karuma,then more action between them. But please not their any wrong yaoi,just not my cup of tea. So please no yaoi between characters.
    But this your fic so all that is totally up to you.My opion
    is a suggestion any way so take with a gain of salt.
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