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By : ryukotsusei
  • From Staphanie on August 15, 2007
    IhateyouIhateyouIhateyouIhateyouIhateyou why id you have to end the chapte there i wante dto see what hiei does to kurama. please update soon as possible. please!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!
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  • From honZeldaFitz on August 15, 2007
    Oh... hurry, Hiei. I hope you kick Youko's ever lovin' ass!!

    This fic is so well written, so dark, so disturbing, so... you. You really know how to put me through it. *sigh* I usually like Youko Kurama, but we've heard in the manga that he was ruthless and liked to play with his prey before killing them, so this ugly side of him is fitting, too. I wonder if this is his true nature, or if his obsession with Yusuke pushed him over the edge. I'm looking forward to the confrontation. Yusuke should be right screwed-up after this. Hiei will have his work cut out for him, poor little emotionally-constipated darling.

    Nice work, as usual. Thanks for posting. :)
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on August 15, 2007
    I am SO glad that this is the last of the torture. Please, please, end it all now and give me back my Kurama. Have Hiei kill him if you must, but let him, Yusuke and everyone else know that everything Youko did and said was NOT the Kurama they had all come to know. And like Yusuke, I, too, believe that that Kurama is still buried deep within the Youko. Please let him come back, if only so that he can make it right with Yusuke before he dies.
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  • From AmyMcClair on August 15, 2007
    YAY HIEI!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. You bring such life to this story that it is scary sometimes.
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  • From ANON - Sweetnsexy89 on August 15, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOO!! U Suck! Evil cliffy! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 15, 2007
    THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SINCE I STARTED THE STORY. GO HIEI! GO HIEI! GO HIEI!

    I loved how Yusuke kept backtalking Kurama even through he was being tortured. When he told him to be honest, I cringed. Also: Why does it matter to you? Did I bruise your ego that badly when I told you that I didn't want you? and Kurama slapping Yusuke across the face was awesome. Yusuke's cries for Hiei, even as he was going insane, are so sad and romantic to me, I love how you did that: Kurama pushing Yusuke too far and Yusuke constantly asking for Hiei, and Kurama only getting angrier. My heart was breaking.

    But that torture...girl, you have problems. And I like that. How did you come up with the electrocution cage? Is that something that exists? Because that's wrong. Shit, I can't wait for the next chapter.

    *GROPES YOU*
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  • From quillbabe on August 15, 2007
    omg... this story... is really, really intense, in your face, and goes into the details and realities of torture. I'm not sure whether to congratulate you for pulling off a scene I've never seen pulled off, or to call you a sick fuck for writing sommething like this. either way, you've done your homework, and I have to give you props on a fic well written in a way that doesn't LET you look away. though I really think you should put some more warnings on there, maybe in the chapters themselves, but i suppose that the whole fic was kind of leading up to sommething like this. looking forward to the next chapter.

    -fallenangelsquill
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  • From honZeldaFitz on August 02, 2007
    Holy sh*t!! I don't check in to aff for a while and this is what I find? You're killing me, woman!

    "It was inevitable when one was completely breaking a slave. First came the anger and resentment, followed quickly by defeat and resignation. The final step was loss of all hope and complete compliance." Such cruelty -- I am so hating Kurama right now. It's obvious that he was never Yusuke's friend. What a scumbag. Lowlife user, selfish, pathetic, emotional weakling, egomaniacal prick! Agh!!!

    I may not make it through this one. *head desk*

    Hiei! Pull your head out of your ass and save your boy. Fox filets for dinner!
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  • From ANON - melissa on August 01, 2007
    oh wow I love your writing! please please update soon I'm dying to know if Hiei comes to save him soon or not!
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  • From AmyMcClair on August 01, 2007
    Holy crap! I am so thrilled that you have let Kurama become this evil. I always knew he was hiding something. Can't wait for your next installment.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 30, 2007
    Like I said to you before, the part where my heart broke was when Yusuke cried out for Hiei and Kurama heard that and belittled him for it. Wonderful work right there.

    You know what I like best about your writing? I mean, besides the fact that you don't hold back? Your plot ideas. I would have never thought of Youko sealing in Yusuke's ki like that, as well as the miko-blessed manacles, and the carpet-poison. That's fucking brilliance right there. And your tender moments between Yusuke and Koenma were so sweet. I hope Koenma calls Hiei and tells him about what Kurama is doing. I really do.

    The lines that killed me were: The day had been one of the most taxing ones that he could remember and it felt like he'd been through hell and back before stopping to take the tour again.

    and but for Kurama to take a slave temporarily? It just wasn't in the man's nature. He used them until he tired of them and generally they were slaughtered afterwards. Beautiful.

    And I bow before you for the real brutal non-con. It was delicious, thank you so much for writing it vividly, disturbingly, and well.

    *bends over*
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on July 27, 2007
    holy fuck............................................dude thats so messed up. looking foward to your next update.
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  • From LadyShinomori on July 27, 2007
    You're horrible! How could you do that to my Yusuke? No cookies for you, you big meanie. Just for that I think someone needs to have Hiei ass raped and beaten with a tire iron! Oh the words fail me, so cruel. You lucky I love you or you be fired. Better make Hiei give him some good lubbins. He's going to need it after all that. He'll just have to come cuddle with me. I can't wait till Hiei gets ahold of him. Better update soon.
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on July 26, 2007
    Oh wow!! I don't know what to say after reading this. I truly didn't think it could get any worse for Yusuke, but this chapter definitely convinced me otherwise.

    Even now, though, I can't say that I hate Kurama. I know that his motives are pure Youko and that even though he claims to feel no guilt over what he's doing, somewhere inside, he does -- even if he doesn't know it himself.

    And just for the record -- I think Koenma is a putz! It's easy to hate someone and put all the blame on them for being 'blackmailed' but if he was god enough to have a relationship and father a child, he should be god enough to accept the responsiblity that goes along with it. Instead, he wallows in self-pity.
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  • From ANON - Kerbear on July 26, 2007
    Chapter 5! Wow!You have to wonder what Hiei would think of Kurama now after doing what he's done to poor Yusuke.My fingers are crossed for Yusuke,he still has much to endure I think.Yusuke is very tough but this could push serveral limits .I wait on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.I hope its soon because I'm going to fall off.
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