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Reviews for Father's Creation

By : Niiro
  • From zombiebait86 on January 27, 2009
    Sweet
    J-chan
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 06, 2008
    Ooohhh...the plot is moving along quite nicely. I liked your portrayal of Hiei, and Hiei biting Kurama to prove ownership. I can't wait to see more!
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  • From Silverdragon21 on April 28, 2008
    i really loved this story, it caught my interest and doesn't seem like it want to let me go

    please update soon
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  • From NAnderson on April 11, 2008
    hmmmm... interesting.... very interesting... I dont normaly like it when hiei is ooc, but 4 some reason I feel the need to read more. I wonder what hiei did when he sank his teeth in??? hummm... I would like to have u mail me the link to the story plot u spoke of in ur AN, if u dont mind. Well I hope to see another update soon!
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  • From thothmoon on April 08, 2008
    Nice to see an update to this ^__^ There were some grammatical things--double consonants and switched-out vowels, that sort--but it was too terribly distracting, and this chapter... Reminds me of all those movies that make you really really dislike the Man in the Suit, yeah?

    So you said you had access to the story that had inspired this--What was its name?
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  • From KimiKumiko on February 03, 2008
    Wow! This is such a great idea. I can't wait to read what happens next! Please update soon as I would like to find out just how things progress from here on out.
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  • From Bobrocks on January 09, 2008
    This fic is very interesting. I love it please update soon!
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  • From mls on January 06, 2008
    love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 06, 2008
    I like this, it's different, and enchanting, and I love AUs. What manga inspired you to write this?

    I'd love to see more.
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  • From thothmoon on January 01, 2008
    An interesting start. I'll have to keep an eye out for the future installations and see where this one goes.

    What is the title of the manga you refer to in your opening notes? The only angel ones I'm really at all familiar with are "Angel Sanctuary" and "Earthian"...
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