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Reviews for The Aftermath

By : 66Hiei08
  • From thothmoon on February 05, 2008
    Yomi--mindfuck. But that's how he always is, no?

    Shishi's sarcasm was excellent; it kept the serious tone in check with a bit of (gruff) humor, ha-ha!

    And just because childbirth is present in a plot, doesn't mean one must go into all the screaming details like in soap operas and sitcoms. I mean, if one wants, go ahead, but it's not necessarily essential, and I think you pulled it just fine.

    And now I wonder--I'm thinking from what's been presented so far Sabaktu's just doomed; plus if Yusuke wants to mate with Hiei also Sabaktu as alpha would be an obstacle (cold, I know, but still)--but you could still surprise us...
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  • From solitare1 on February 05, 2008
    You have these characters so true to form. Yu is so dumb sometimes and never knows when to hush, good thing Kurama is back and by his side. Hope Hiei is fairing as well.
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  • From mhmartini on February 05, 2008
    Finally! I know Kurama and Yusuke have a long road ahead of them, but for the moment they seem...settled, at least. I do fear for Hiei and his son, but I also realize that Sabie's death is the only thing that can set Hiei free from under him. It really sucks for Hiei, though. I mean, within a week he found out he's a father, going to be a grandfather, going to be a father again, he was placed in a submissive position to his son, his firstborn is dying, and now he's on the lam with a dying son and quite a few buns in the oven. I hope the gang finds him and reels him in before he either gets attacked or goes self-destructive. I'm interested to see how this will play out with Yukina, too, since she's not as naive as one would think.
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  • From kerbear on February 04, 2008
    Wow,what a tear jerker this is starting out as.I really hope you let Kurama and Yusuke Bond somewhat here,they both need it(badly).At least my vote is for these two and not Yomi.And poor Hiei loseing His son/master,I hope they can work this out as well.It sounds like it would take Both Yusuke and Kurama to help him through this.
    Wow what a great load of updates as well.You write quit well and Ilook forward to the next few chapters.
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  • From mhmartini on February 04, 2008
    You sure didn't waste any time in posting these scenes! Yay! I really like the sequel so far, but you leave me wondering and hoping all will be well. Time will tell, I guess. Great job and please keep up the good work.
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  • From thothmoon on February 04, 2008
    Oh, and I forgot to mention in the other review pertaining to your mention of artwork in the opening notes to Chapter 2 I would be happy to take a try at it ... but could I have a prompt to get me going?
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  • From thothmoon on February 04, 2008
    Well hell, now that they're out of the dungeons you're just bringing back the entire cast, huh? I especially enjoy the presence of the other Makai Lords, whom you've personified VERY WELL. Yomi's not a vengeful rapist and Mukuro's not a bitch always wanting to jump Hiei's rod ^_^ I look forward to seeing what will happen with the situation between Yusuke and Kurama, and wonder when Hiei and Sabaktu (should he survive that long) will be brought out of isolation and back to the others.

    Oh, and I need to rate after this, don't I? Well, shall do that promptly, then.
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  • From solitare1 on February 04, 2008
    Boy, that fool broke them really bad. They won't ever be right again. Your story is really good and agnsty and I won't like it any other way. Be checking back for more.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on February 04, 2008
    I have to say that I really really like your portrayal of Yomi. In fanfic, he's either a rapist or a stalker, and you've done him justice. I like that he won't take advantage of Kurama, despite Kurama's neediness, and his moment with Shura was very cute. I'm a big Yomi fan and its nice to see him written so well.

    I also like how you're having Yusuke handle the repercussions. He's somewhat strong, but occasionally freaks out. And the scene with Kuwabara was sad but sweet. I just feel badly for Hiei - his son's going to die and he can't really do anything about it. Also, I hope Yusuke finds Hiei before he gives birth because what Koenma said makes me worried.
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  • From thothmoon on February 04, 2008
    Ah, it's here! Okay, I've only read Chapter 1 thus far, but I'll probably get through 10 and let you know what I think by the day's end. I cannot tell you how happy I am to see this here. I was thinking that Yusuke and Kuwabara might talk before the latter being processed. But I wonder where Hiei and Kurama--and Sabaktu, for that matter--are right now...? (*Read and find out, idiot*) ^__^
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