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Reviews for Rescuing Hiei

By : 66Hiei08
  • From on March 31, 2008
    Sorry, but by the time I got to reading this, the three parts were already up, so I couldn't be a loyal reviewer. But, I swear, this was such an emotional story. I was so upset at first that it wasn't going to be YxKxH, but eh, I got over it. I think what turns most people off from actually reading it, is when they notice that it's written in the script form. Honestly, when I first clicked on it, I had no intention of continuing when I noticed it would be a bit difficult to get. But, I somehow accidentally saved it to my favorites, and now I'm glad I did! I totally can't wait until the next installment! One thing that kinda amused me was that you didn't put in any swear words. Why was that? I mean, it's basically a story filled with prostitution, incest, yaoi, and the likes, so what difference does typing in 'bitch' make? Just wondering! lol
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  • From lifeislifedealwithit2532 on March 23, 2008
    I loved it. All three. I would like to see another installment to this saga. It's been a while since I actually stuck with a saga but yours drew me in like no other has in a long time.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on March 15, 2008
    I hope I'm not too late to chime in and say that I'd like to see more. I really would like Hiei Yusuke and Kurama to end up together in the end, I think Hiei needs the support.

    Also, you can see how many hits you get on ff.net if you log in and go to your Stats page. That tells you how many hits you get and divides it up by chapter.
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  • From Yukinaskitty on February 28, 2008
    Plz upload the next story, i love to read your work, I made account here just so i could ask you to continue this. It's the best series


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  • From mhmartini on February 24, 2008
    Do you really have to ask?
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  • From kerbear on February 23, 2008
    I want another installment,It can't end there,theres still so much work to do with Shishi and the kids
    plus welcoming Hiei back in to the fold with Kurama and Yusuke won't be all that easy either.Even if he just lives at the castle with Kurama and Yusuke at first anyway.I look very much forward to more work from you.
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  • From thothmoon on February 18, 2008
    Sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters--was away. So Hiei's okay now, aside from the fact that his mate's a vegetable. And Blue's right--the Yusuke-Yomi exchange was very amusing.

    I like the question mark and contemplative Hm... at the story's end--you did conclude it openly, allowing the launch of another sequel if you chose to.
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  • From kerbear on February 16, 2008
    Gd,you really know how to end a story to keep us coming back.Sorry I haven't reviewed till now but there were so many new chapters to go through that I just kept going till the end.Poor Shishi,are you really going to let him just fade away not knowing Hiei is there for him no matter what marks they have together.Its great to know Hiei knows that he can count on Yusuke and Kurama but lose his own mate would still be quite a blow to live with.I had tears in my eyes at the last chapter.I can't wait to see how Hiei handles a meeting on purpose or not with Touya and Jin.I sit on the edge of my seat waiting for the next set.Hope its soon
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  • From BlueUtopiah on February 15, 2008
    I have a strange feeling that Shishi isn't going to make it - which would be sad. He's really had a rough time of it. And Hiei won't be doing any better because of it - Yusuke and Kurama are going to have their hands more full than they already are.

    You've really made the children such interesting and endearing characters. I really like Yusuke and Hiei's twins - they're crazy, they bite, and one of them has Yusuke's potty mouth. And Kurama's little girl kitsune is already a trickster.

    BTW, the Yusuke and Yomi interaction is friggin hysterical. I think Yomi is a bit amused by everyone's favourite Toushin.
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  • From thothmoon on February 15, 2008
    Heh, Yusuke--even if he did have pictures of the kids, he really couldn't show them to Yomi, now could he? And if Yomi keeps obliterating all the Ganderran brothels, where's he supposed to go to get laid, HM? ^__^ I anticipate their finding Shishi again--and wonder what condition he may be in--but these two chapters were good for a bit of comic relief, at least to me they were.

    So, art; how about once I'm done with Sabaktu, I take a crack at one of the coupling things you suggest, eh?
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  • From thothmoon on February 15, 2008
    Oh man, it's almost sort of like Touya's and Shishi's personas have flipped some, eh? Well, the former's been expelled--I wonder if there'll be any more confrontation between the two, hm.

    Koenma conversing with the Jagan brings an amusing image to mind. Looking forward to more.
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  • From thothmoon on February 14, 2008
    Ha-ha, so Kurama's going to be "cooking" some stuff up, eh? I had almost forgotten that the drugs were one of those shadier under-elements that I liked about this story. And it looks like Yusuke (and Kurama) and Shishi are working toward some stable ground--now, to get Hiei's bloodwork done and proceed with ... chemistry ^-^
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  • From Raholea on February 14, 2008
    I found and started reading the whole series last night, and just finished- I haven't even taken the time to review the others (mostly cause they are finished works). Having not watched near as much of the series as I would have liked, I can only be really familiar with around half on the main characters. But that hasn't slowed my enjoyment at all!!! I have enjoyed everything and can't wait to see what will happen next. I also appreciate how you permit your characters to "cuss" without actually writing out the words. It has definitely given me more respect for you. And while it took a few pages to get used to, I have found your script- style writing rather refreshing!! keep up the good work!!
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  • From thothmoon on February 14, 2008
    Oh man, I'd almost forgotten about the consequences of the drugs (that's bad, since I'd commented on him trying to smoke the carrot before, huh?). Detox--"fun"; but should be interesting. And it looks like Yusuke (and Kurama) and Shishiwakamaru might have themselves a long, hm ... "enriching"? conversation to come.
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  • From thothmoon on February 14, 2008
    This is Botan. Don't eat her.

    And then Hiei trying to smoke the carrot--XP Good humor to lace into the situation. I kind of saw the food shock coming; silly Yusuke, should have started him off on something less rich than ice cream, and then Shishi didn't exactly improve on it either. I sense the distinct possibility of one of those clear plastic hospital bags and an IV in a possibly unconscious, possibly pissed off fire demon's future. (Which means he may be out longer than anticipated; poor Botan...)
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