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Reviews for ~Tried...and True?~

By : Metranome
  • From BlueUtopiah on March 30, 2008
    I know I sound like a sputtering fangirl when I say this but: I AM FLAILING BECAUSE YOU'RE WRITING A SEQUEL TO ONCE BURNED SJHDFOSLJFHOSBFDLBSL. *dies*

    Seriously though, I adore your writing, and Once Burned is one of my faves of all time. You continuing this just made my year!

    I like that Hiei is having doubts, and I also like how he doesn't know if Kurama will grow old and die in human form, or if he'll be able to live on. That's something that - in reality - is up in the air. I'm sure there isn't a plethora of youkos who take over human bodies, so Kurama's future is definitely unsure. And the fight between Hiei and Yusuke? Very well done. I love the verbal jabs - charcoal breath was amusing - and the fighting as they spoke. Poor Hiei, he doesn't really know how to channel his feelings yet, and I doubt he's going to just speak to Kurama about this.

    And I loved this line: He belonged where the sky raged always with storms, and the wind carried the scent of blood and battle, and his every waking moment was one of danger So pretty. I can't wait to see more of this!
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