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By : 66Hiei08
  • From thothmoon on June 22, 2008
    "Hiei, if you kiss my feet I'm going to shove my foot down your throat."

    SO Yusuke.

    I was sort of getting this Joy Luck Club feel from the talk of First this and Second that, but they're adjusting. The banter between Hiei's kids and the kits was funny too.

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  • From cahepyp on June 22, 2008
    *cheers* Yay I got my wish! ^_^ Finally the family can be together.
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  • From thothmoon on June 21, 2008
    I always do love how you characterize the kids XP

    Well now, this is like a proper conclusion to the previous two chapters: the beginning of assimilating Hiei into a more stable family-life. Said family-life could probably benefit from someone with Hiei's speed to keep up with all the kinder, hehe. Looking forward to how this stage develops (hah, pun: more kinder on the way).
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  • From thothmoon on June 20, 2008
    Oh wow ... Okay, I just read from 29-40, so forgive me if I leave only a brief review, since otherwise this would be too incredibly long and have to be broken up into segments:

    Shishi's passing - damn! I was hoping he might come out of it or something. Oh, but there's still the foreshadowing of a last scene between him and Hiei before he crosses over, so.

    The twins and Chi - I like how their maturity kind of confuses some people, because they're far more advanced than human children at that age. They're aware of a lot more than they're credited for. Also the way the twins play protectors to Chi is endearing.

    Ryuji and Pehjo - *snickers* Will we see more of the skink?

    Yomi and Koenma - BEST humor (though their dialogues often are) XP

    The Yusuke-Kurama-Hiei "fiasco" - resolution (or the beginnings thereof) at LAST! The vital part's been done--Hiei's been "bound" to them or whatever, thus his life saved, so now they can worry more about the "moving on" in this area and easing into something resembling a ... not-as-much-a-fiasco family.

    Looking forward to more!
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  • From kerbear on June 20, 2008
    Wow,Hiei is finally home,but it seems to be a rough road still to come.Can't wait to see what happens now,the boys will be very very glad to see Hiei.Great job
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  • From kerbear on June 18, 2008
    Hey what about Hiei's kids?Maybe that would open up Hiei's thoughts on returning than.Wow this gets deeper
    and deeper.Yet I wouldn't miss a page of it.
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  • From kerbear on June 15, 2008
    That would be the hardest thing to do is tell the children that their parent is dead.I really hope you let
    Hiei say goodbye (they both need the closer).Wow,this is still such an intense story and I'm still on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens.Shouldn't it be Hiei to tell his kids.
    Great job as always
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 14, 2008
    I feel so badly for Hiei, and for Chiiasi - poor thing, he just lost his mom and now his dad is running away to Makai. And I defintely want to know more about the whole complicated demon situation - Yusuke probably has no idea what he's getting himself into, that's why it's good that Kurama is there to guide him. And how many babies are those two going to make? They're going to have a clan by the time they're done!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 11, 2008
    I really liked Hiei's whole backstory about meeting his brother and killing his father, you're very creative on fire demon customs. And that was a very mean place to stop!
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  • From cahepyp on June 11, 2008
    Heh, finally. I've been waiting for someone to do that scene right. It always bugged me when the series floated close to Yukina finding out about her brother but skirted it. And trust it to the SDF to make a flashy last second entrance. Great job writing in the explaination of Ryuji, it fits in well with the rest of the series.
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  • From cahepyp on June 07, 2008
    Phew...I finally caught up to the current chapters. Sorry I haven't reviewed before now because I love to read you work. I really like how you're taking the characters and slowly developing them your own way, they are different from the show but you make it beleivable through events.

    I also like your script style, it's refreshing and I can almost see each chapter played out, but why are you always explaining and apologizing for it? It's your fic, you can write the way you feel comfortable, and readers who don't like it and choose not to read are missing out on something good IMO.

    I'm not very good at critques so I won't go much into details, but I can say that I look forward to every new chappy. Great work, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what's gonna happen next.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 02, 2008
    I like this. I'm especially interested in Hiei's brother and the spells that Hiei has. It seems he hasn't recovered from his time in the brothel as well as he'd like others to think. I have a feeling it's going to give him problems if he doesn't deal with it soon.

    Keep posting, I'm dying to see what happens next!
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on June 01, 2008
    looks like things are gonna get worse before they get better. i just hope the brothers get there in time before something happens to yukina or kasaba. update soon ^^
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  • From thothmoon on May 31, 2008
    Okay, I've read Chapter the Second through Chapter the Ninth (I think) in this sitting. I like that even after being murdered Shizuru's still as piss-fire as always ^_^ Hiei's devotion to our comatose He-Banshee was endearing; Yusuke's horny (understandably, given current events); but at least Kurama's hormones aren't impeding his judgment just yet (though as you said, Yusuke wouldn't have done anything *too* stupid).

    I'm wondering if the relationship between Hiei's brother and the vampire (by the way, Hiei's obviously heat-influenced description of said vamp was hilarious) is some sort of D/s affair. Also, Hiei and Kurama are going into heat, albeit that's somewhat thanks to the Hot Juice, but I wonder if there'll be any similar cycle on Shishi's behalf even though he's inactive. Hm... Well, shall exercise patience with ze dial-up to read and review again soon (I know I'm rather behind right now; forgive me).
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  • From kerbear on May 31, 2008
    Poor dude had to lose his arm,at least it'll grow back.This story is jsut as intense has the others and I very much look forward to the next update.
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