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Reviews for MISSING YOU

By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From ANON - Hemamal on January 24, 2009
    Ooooh, could it be that Kurama isn't the father of Maya's baby? Some many ideas are running through my mind. You're so awesome when it comes to tension
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 23, 2009
    This is an interesting plot. A very interesting plot. I feel so badly for Hiei. And the tattoo on Kurama's arm is beyond hot (I mean, it's sentimental too but it's also hot.) I have a pic of Kurama with that dragon tattoo all over his body and I swoon everytime I look at it.

    Poor Maya too, I have a feeling she's going to get the short end of the stick when this story is over.
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  • From mhmartini on January 22, 2009
    WARNING - Spoilers in this review - couldn't help it.

    oooh, you sneaky author, you! Very sly, slipping in a wife like that. I was expecting that companion to be male. You've shown me just how closed minded I can be when it comes to the guys. But I also was stuck pondering that relationship all day. The part that stuck in my mind the most was Kurama and Maya dressing his wounds. My gut reaction was to wonder how anyone dares to touch Kurama (other than Hiei, of course). But then again, she's his wife. They share their lives and bed and bodies and he has made a human life for himself with her. I was thinking about what they share and what he has not shared with her (the whole demon thing) and I felt kind of sad for her. I hope she does not end up heartbroken in the end.

    Strangely enough, I envision the Kurama in your story differently than in most others. I usually picture him as very thin, like a young man who has not "filled out" yet - like he looks in the series. When I envision them dressing his wounds, he's more filled out, like a mature adult human would be. Of course he's still fit and strong, just more mature than I usually picture him. I'm not sure what about your story gave me a different mental picture, but the whole point of telling you that was to let you know you have inspired a different visual picture, and I enjoy your story and picturing the scenes in my mind.
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  • From ANON - Hemamal on January 20, 2009
    Yusuke is married to Yukina and Kuwa is married to Keiko?? That is sooo weird! And Kurama is married with a baby on the way? I feel so bad for Hiei!

    Update soon!!!! I can't wait!
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  • From 66Hiei08 on January 20, 2009
    If you've ever read any of my stories, you'll know that I love long, involved stories.. as long as they're updated frequently, lol. But no pressure.
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  • From ANON - Vana on January 20, 2009
    I love all of your stories!! It drives me crazy when you right new ones because I read the next chapter and have to wait. Its like reading a really good book and you keep having to put it down. Keep up the wonderful work.

    The 2nd chapter was interesting I wasnt expecting that to say the least! I hope the next chapter comes soon!
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  • From ANON - Sandra on January 19, 2009
    Yet again, another hit! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From mhmartini on January 15, 2009
    oooooh, this looks like a great start! I can't wait to see where you go with this. The lemon was all kinds of hot, with just enough repressed feeling and hidden innocence to really liven it up. It's the bittersweet angle that gets me every time, and you hit it right on the head. I'm already hoping for a happy ending and waiting (im)patiently to see how you get us from here to there!!
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  • From ANON - Animediva on January 15, 2009
    I LOVE THIS FIC! Don't stop! You can't them up now! Well,technically you can since you're the author, but I have to see how they get back together. Why did he leave the tear gem behind?
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  • From NAnderson on January 14, 2009
    god talk about a heart breaking ending. But im happy 2 c that u got right back into writing so fast ^.^ I have to say I was really worried there 4 a bit when u said u were out of ideas 4 stories :/ but im glad 2 c it wasnt true XD... Im kinda wondering about that mark that was left on hiei. Was it a real mating mark at like a lower level or was it just a common hicky lol? Oh well im sure ull tell us later. So pretty pretty please update soon (insert big fox kit eyes here)!!!!!!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 13, 2009
    That lemon was hot. Very hot. *fans self* Now why would Kurama want to leave that? Stupid fox. Also: Yomi is win.
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  • From ANON - fluffybunnies on January 13, 2009
    this is a an enticing start, i can't wait to see how this continues
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  • From LadyLaran on January 13, 2009
    Goofy Kurama...you're not supposed to leave him!!!!!
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