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Reviews for Kurama's mistake

By : xkuramaxhieix
  • From ANON - tk04 on February 28, 2013
    Just checking to see if you planning to come and finish the story. It been a life time (to me it is) since you came back make some update to the story. I want to know how the story going to end. It driving me crazy not know what going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - tk04 on September 06, 2012
    To be honest I don't like this stoty but somehow i can't seen to stop reading. There alot interesting plot in the stoty. Anyways, please continue. I want to know what happen next. I want more tears, torture, understanding, and love between them.
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  • From ANON - Promise on October 04, 2010
    YAY its me Promise again this story has also made my top 5 list lol i just loooooooovvvvveeee kuramaXhiei they so cute and oh yea youko's my baby but yea once again yea i kno its like been some LONG MONTHS but hey just showing my appriation in writing these stories and dissapoint in not finishing them ugh but u kno hey if u still remember ur account on adultfanfiction then hit me up lol :)
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  • From ANON - Hi on August 08, 2010
    Update Update. Read it in one go. I like it a lot. :)
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  • From ANON - ruthie balboa on April 10, 2010
    This is an interesting story. I like it, although it does make Youko seem like an ass but I think that's how he's supposed to be. I really want to know what happens next! Please update soon!
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  • From LightShadowsh on January 27, 2010
    oh boy... sounds like Youko is making more problems.. it's already not balanced between them >>
    good story
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  • From ANON - Lauren on September 06, 2009
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2009
    Please don't be mad or discourage because of this but, the latest chapter is choppy and saying the previous chapter was all a dream is a little bit of a copout. I really did love this story when it first started and want to see it to the end but I think the plot needs some work and rewriting the last few chapters.

    I hope this isn't too harsh.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on July 13, 2009
    Oh thank goodness!!! I was REALLY scared there!! i can't wait to see what the fox has cooked up!!!
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  • From ANON - lauren on July 05, 2009
    This is a really good story so far! I cant wait for you to update!
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  • From TaiKaiten on May 26, 2009
    Really good story! A real page-turner. A rather quick and bland way of writing, but there is so much potential to this already good story. Good, but not amazing, not yet. Like i said, great potential. I can see that you've grown even through the process of writing. Comparing chapter 6/7 to chapter 10, there is such a difference in writing level that it's awe-inspiring.
    If my vote counts, I'd say a happy ending, since sad endings make me feel like the story isnt finished, or the author(ess) took the easy way out. Unless it's almost PERFECTLY written, then it should be happy. I've only found one perfect sad story so far out of three years on this site. ([i sried so hard at it, it was embarrassing]) So, since you haven't quite reached your full potential, i'd make it happy.
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  • From ANON - hieilovour on May 19, 2009
    i really do love this chapter...poor hiei! but i wish you wre able to update faster...it seems as if you keep getting slowr and slower.
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  • From ANON - adah on May 18, 2009
    i do love your story and even though kurama is not so good in here... i really can't just hate him... really... though i must admit i'm begining to wonder what will be in this story... as much as i like angst and i myself wrote in the same manner with blood and violence and stuff, personally i don't like sad or tragedy... heheh... besides i do love the characters to be just themselves... in other words, i hate OOCness.... not that much but enough to make me stop reading once it become to much for me... and i must say, kurama is so OOC here... it's not yet overwhelming but still threatening.... and besides, i really, personaly don't think kurama could fall in love and considered being mated with a ningen no matter how much he respect the race... and also, i hate the fact that he considered cheating on his "belove" wife by proposing to hiei or making hiei his mistress... to think that he said he do "love" here? which to his fury, made hiei blind? i really couldn't find the logic of that...
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on May 17, 2009
    I struggled with myself about whether or not to write this, but I like the story too much not to do so. When I read the first chapters of the story, I thought it was an excellent premise and plotline that would start out with good H/K angst and then lead into a romance between them.

    However, the last chapter and this one seem to me to have taken that very premise and turned it into a 'how much of a cruel bastard can Kurama be made into and how much torture/hurt can be heaped onto Hiei', and I have to say, neither of these seems to fit the story.

    Kurama is nothing if not rational, even when his emotional human side takes control. So to see him get angry at Hiei and vent his rage against Hiei for a decision that Kurama himself made (because deep down, as I believe was stated in an earlier chapter, he has feelings for the fire demon) makes absolutely no sense to this reader. Then, too, Hiei's mute acceptance of Kurama's rage seems not in keeping at all with his character -- regardless of whether he loves the fox or not. I don't believe he'd just sit silently by and let Kurama take that anger out on him... he definitely fight back.

    I hope that some sensible resolution will be coming in the future because I truly believe this is an excellent story and has the potential to continue to be so. I just feel that these two chapters have gotten it off track.
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  • From Jaino on May 02, 2009
    Alright!

    I was a little sad about the last part but this one makes up for it! I love this new direction and can't wait to see how everything plays out. Please keep writing :D
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