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Reviews for Hiei's Harem - Pt 11 - Asserting

By : 66Hiei08
  • From POHness1 on November 26, 2009
    *sigh* i know that he needed to mark the kids so that they would live, and i hope that they dont hate him too much for it. at least he can do the same thing with them as he did with Silis and Gamaru, so that if they find someone to love they can be with them. still, i guess we will have to see.

    as far as the new group of villains, i hope they dont cause too much of an annoyance. no guarantees, i know, but still.

    im looking forward to the rest. plz continue. ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on November 20, 2009
    NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Gamaru is going to dye how could you......i could hardly finish the story because when he said accept it i just started crying my eyes out.......great chapter.
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  • From POHness1 on November 20, 2009
    aww, thats kinda sad. I liked Gamaru, but... if he really wanted to die...
    the world is cruel, is it not?
    oh well. i guess we will see what happens.

    plz continue. ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on November 18, 2009
    wow so much to read sorry i have been really busy with upcoming test and studying and work i hardly get the time to read i am glad to see that there back and helping gamaru still want to see how they will act with the other females..great job
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on November 14, 2009
    i say celabrate....i love that fact tachi has a brother ther interaction reminds me of my little brother that was cool.....i still can't wait to see how the others will react to the new females.....and what will yusuke and kurama do when they find out about the babies or will they?....great job
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  • From POHness1 on November 14, 2009
    yay, you almost have 400 reviews! thats great. ^_^

    i love hoe hiei gives them the chance to stay in their home territories... although he may just be trying to get rid of some of the trouble. lol

    i cant wait til he gets back to his ravine. im sure the homecoming will be better than it would have been if Sylk was still with them.

    plz continue. ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on November 10, 2009
    YES!!!!!!!!!!! Wow that was well worth the wait cookies and cakes to you for a job done greatly.....got to go in class altough a friend of mine was reading with me and you gave her a nosebleed i think shes hooked know.....thumbs way up!!!!!! when i told her that tachi was my name on here she freaked and wants her own now.....uh oh the teacher is coming got really go great job.....Bye4Now.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on November 10, 2009
    Great Job!!! sorry this review is so short but i am late for school....bye
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  • From POHness1 on November 08, 2009
    man, Sylk is getting on my nerves. she needs to get over herself. reaally quick, before she gets herself killed or whatnot.

    at least the rest of the group seems like a nicer bunch. i thought it was nice that they wanted to know about Kurama and Yusuke. and thank god he is close to getting back to the ravine. i wonder what will happen. hm...

    plz continue ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on November 05, 2009
    Sorry i have been so busy i barely had time 2 read the latest chapters wow 4 and i love them....i really like how you used the question i asked you in the story...it so sad to read a about poor gam....but i know hiei won't let him die........GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep yp the Great work looking foward to more.
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  • From Legilmyth on November 05, 2009
    I just wanted to let you know that I have very much been enjoying your story.
    However, because of some personal stuff I wont be reading any more for quite some time.
    I hope to one day have the oportunity to find this story line again and read all you have written.
    But life is funny that way.
    Any way keep up the wonderful work, I have very much enjoyed following you thus far on this journey.
    Happy writing.
    Legilmyth
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on November 01, 2009
    wow i love my part in this and can't wait to see it develop.....great job and i hope sylk doesn't die but get's a better additude to hiei for saving her.....poor eboni thinks hiei doesn't want here if she only knew.....oh btw who's baby is it that tachi is caring yusuke's or kurama's although i favor red heads i love them both...:D oh what is happening with them anyway? will they ever find out about the babies or will hiei rasie them as his own?.......great chapter oh and i noticed how tachi seems to be the mothering type is that just her instincts since shes pregers or is it on purpose........can't wait for more.
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  • From Asher990 on October 30, 2009
    Already on sequel 11! You sure do work fast! Anyway, love your stories. There quite interesting and funny.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on October 29, 2009
    Great chapters....hiei is slowly but surely becoming the ultamite alpha weather he want's to or not.
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  • From POHness1 on October 29, 2009
    hahaha! another ruler down. ^_^ this is getting way too interesting.

    plz continue. ^_^
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