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Reviews for Virus

By : thothmoon
  • From ANON - ruthie balboa on August 09, 2010
    I found myself confused beyond belief when I first read chapters 1 and 2, but after I left the story and came back to it, it made much more sense. It is a very interesting story! It is a bit heavy on the reader to figure out what the hell is going on but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It stimulates a reader who is willing to think and work his or her brain. This story is one of those stories that would be one I would favorite but not recommend to certain people. I seriously enjoyed it though, and found it entertaining yet dramatic and angsty at the same time. Good luck with chapter three! Ummm, by the way, I am eternally curious as to if Youko Kurama is still a fully separate entity of conscience in Shuuichi Kurama, and if so I would love to see a bit about what he thinks and his reactions, especially to Yomi's 'treatment'. I hope chapter three clears up exactly what the virus is; is it Youko Kurama himself, or just the transformation into a body that no longer exists accompanied by the mixed up memories and psyche of Shuuichi Kurama. Anyway, I wish you luck and I'll be awaiting your update of this story!
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  • From ANON - ruthie balboa on February 18, 2010
    It's a very intriguing story! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ichigokun on February 06, 2010
    Very interesting take.

    I like how you had Kurama feel alienated from his human body- it was very haunting.
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on January 17, 2010
    This was like poetry, I swear. I love the repetition of form and phrase. It flowed so beautifully, and the "something stirred" line was a perfect transition between scenes and a perfect way to end the chapter. I also like the idea for this, that Youko is kind of like a virus. That, in a way, he causes Kurama's "illness," which seemed less like illness and more like sexual frustration until the end. Oh I wish he'd have just continued that action with Hiei!

    Update this soon, please! I can't wait to see what you do with the other two chapters!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 02, 2010
    Liked the viewpoint. Liked the way you came full circle: same writing pattern/style at the beginning and end. It's nice to see your stuff again. MISS YOU, THOTH.
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  • From kle10 on December 31, 2009
    DUNE REFERENCE TO SANDTROUT AND LETO II'S VISION! Wahahahaha, your fics make me happy. xD I get slightly distracted by the awesome literary allusions. Ehehehehe.

    Good writing, here. Sort of dreamlike. Heh, Kurama eating raw meat, and being all mixed-up inside. And the yaoi that almost was. And Hiei being IC, and being concerned and then actually sounding concerned for a millisecond. Ahaha. Love it. Looking forward to more chapters, but this would've stood as a oneshot on its own, quite well. :3

    (FREAKING DUNE REFERENCE~! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeheehee, and Kurama-Suuichi's just the sort of geek who would read Western literature so as to avoid getting too bored in Ningenkai... x3!)
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  • From 66Hiei08 on December 29, 2009
    There's my old buddy. I've been missing your reviews in my new stories. I have a monster series going on in the General area right now. This story was a bit "high brow' with some of the words and stuff, but I think I got it. Just would've liked to have seen it go a bit farther with Hiei (wink wink, lol). But I'll be sure to read the next installment. Glad to have your talent back, though.
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