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Reviews for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 13 - Inheriting

By : 66Hiei08
  • From LadySesshoumaru on January 29, 2010
    wow she's gone she really left....she was not my fav person but i didn't want to see her die....but she is tough and i am sure that won't be the last that we see of her....i got a question when is shishi and touya give brith.....great job.
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  • From POHness1 on January 29, 2010
    *sigh* whats the chances that we will ever see her again? its kinda sad. i disliked her, but not enough to want her to die. the world is cruel sometimes, is it not?

    oh well. she left the babies, which is good as far as they go. Eboni probably wont be happy. *shrug*

    plz continue. ^_^
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  • From POHness1 on January 26, 2010
    YES! thank you Eboni for finally telling your mother what you feel! I knew that you were most likely staying with Hiei, but I was a bit worried about how attached you are to your mother. Power to you, girl! WOOHOO!!

    And i thought Hiei said that is Sylk left, he would be keeping the kids...hm... that could have just been me misreading. and yeah, where would she have to go?

    i am so overjoyed. I like Eboni, and its nice to know that shes staying. so, does that mean that all the births are done, or are there still some that are left? i cant wait to read what happens next! yay! ^_^

    plz continue. ^_^
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  • From geeclock on January 26, 2010
    Ah-ha, I finally caught up with you! I love your series. No matter how long it goes on it doesn't ever get old or feel redundant. I know long stories can be nerve racking at times, ya know "Should I do this or that?" and, "The story would be brillant I do this, but will my reads like it?" Your plot decidions are so bold and risky, and I admire that. I can't wait to see what curveballs you throw at our favorite Koorime mext. I hope Kurama and Yusuke appear sometime soon.
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  • From Yuliya2009 on January 24, 2010
    Oh, I just meant that the site is difficult to read as in, counting all of Hiei's kids, and how many in Hiei's pack are still pregnant. Cause it lists everyone that's pregnant, including ones that are dead and infants that are also dead.
    Yep a filler. Great story though! I shall read it till the end.
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  • From POHness1 on January 23, 2010
    ah yes, the lovely pitter-patter of half kitsune kits. its such a lovely time now. ^_^
    i guess that, now that they have had their babies, he will be moving the main pack to the new place? or will the announcement of a new Demon Lord come first? we shall see...

    plz continue. ^_^

    and no, im not having any problems viewing the screen.
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  • From Yuliya2009 on January 22, 2010
    Still reading the story. I check everyday on my phone! ^^ I was wondering, why doesn't hiei have any special kids? All of his are health, for someone born sterile, he's gotten lucky xD Can you update this stories site? It's a bit messy, and I cant tell just how many kids Hiei has now including the ones he's taking care of... The number is getting up there lol
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on January 21, 2010
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
    i hope that it is a wonderful one for you....4 glorious chapters wow to give us such a gift on your brithday was truly a treat.....hiei is a really good guy at heart and they will all see that soon enough...Excellent Job....HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

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  • From POHness1 on January 21, 2010
    HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

    ah yes, such drama. such lovely, anguish-filled, action-packed drama. i just love to hear about how theye all are doing. and i can understand koenma's worries. he just needs to realize that hiei is a good person inside. everything will go fine... ... i hope. hehe

    plz continue. and have a lovely day! ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on January 19, 2010
    yeah tachi is about to have her babies and three to boot.......wow....wonder what they'll look like i can't wait....love the two chaps....great job
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on January 16, 2010
    wow i cried....i laughed and i got angry it was three wonderfull chapters i am truly lovin the plot twist.....i need to know how the other lords will react......and remember to make some one feel so much emotion from reading your work is a sign of a great writer.
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  • From POHness1 on January 16, 2010
    I admit that it was a strange turn of events. Not too unexpected, though, since Hiei always believed that she was scared of him and stuffs. *shrug* i wonder if the other lords will try to use her as bait, not that shes in the human world. i guess we will see...

    and as usual, i want to beat Kuwabara upside the head. he proves on again that he is so narrow-minded. i have always disliked him. Yukina, i dont know what you see in him. *sigh*

    well, i hope that the announcement of his new position goes well. i cant wait to see everyone's reactions. ^_^

    plz continue.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on January 14, 2010
    nooooo poor staci she is so confused and hiei is sad he is losing her to i can't wait to see what happens next?.....great two chappies.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on January 12, 2010
    wow who is it that he has to kill please not yusuke or kurama but isn't yusuke quest class like hiei and if so that would leave kurama.....noooooooooo........so i wonder if sylk will just give up the kids and walk away from hiei......and i can't wait for yusuke, kurama, and yomi's reaction to the news that hiei is now lord hiei...great job.
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  • From POHness1 on January 09, 2010
    i have no problem with Mukuro ending in an honorable death. i found her to be an interesting character as well. the fact that she likes Hiei as much as i do makes her a kool person in my book. ^_^

    and so, Hiei gains more power. this is lovely. i wonder will his Jagan be able to hold back all of this new power. and wait... if Hiei has now taken control of Mukuro's lands, then that gives Yusuke a reason to here from him again. they would want to know of the shift in power. yay!

    do not worry about me ever leaving. this series is too interesting to let go of.

    plz continue. ^_^
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