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Reviews for All's Well

By : Artemick
  • From ANON - Aya on May 10, 2014
    another brilliant story ^^
    i finished this in one go! i couldn't stop reading, i was too addicted! seriously, what an awesome read! thank you for making this... pls post more interesting different characters with kurama ^^ i loove those the most! im off to read the rest of your fics :)
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  • From ANON - LadyMacabre on August 01, 2012
    i was left speechless upon finishing ch 3 and i wanted to cry terribly but i was left numb from shock and throughout my reading i had to repeatedly rise from my seat and pace around if only to soothe my nerves and relieve the building up tension in my muscles. Like many fangirls i like my yaoi laced with bdsm and non-con on the side so I wasn't expecting this to affect me so deeply.What I found most impressive in your fiction is how you are a able to write a rape scene that is both emotionally gripping and terrifying without being laden with excessive and senseless graphic imagery and more admirable is you succeed wherin many fail, to portray the true face of rape, the highest form of violence one can do to another, reminding your readers to be careful and mindful into simplyfying it as a tool for harmless erotic fantasies and fictional roleplay.

    It crushed me to read kurama so vulnerable and childlike as he tried to explain his past, his mind almost shattered ,a far cry from the scheming and manipulative kitsune who even under times of peril is still able to keep a cool mind and strategize. That desire to bargain another form of entertainment whether by song or storytelling, his admittance to his crimes and pleas for pity, his ignorance in giving pleasure every single thing tore at my chest but what haunted me the most was how he begged for rest, promising that they can have him at a later time, a final admittance of defeat that the horrors will continue on. Despite my pessimism that it would take a while for kurama to even function normally i was pleasantly surprised at the end of your story. What i mean to say is its incredible how you managed to maneuver your story into ending with something so positive, i felt all the mental anguish in me ease and ebb away, despite not being what I expected. To say the least it was absolutely epic and fantastic, and an original end fitting its title “All is well” or rather all will be well Kurama. Though a part of me is stil clammoring for bloodshed and I wish you'd make a sequel with the Tantei or even Yomi getting even yet somehow after reading what kurama went thru I can't help but think revenge is definitely not sweet.

    Keep up the good work I love your fiction!










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  • From NyteKit13 on December 05, 2011
    Right, Zel's the most stable. Kurama's in for a hell of a time, if this is true. It is a testament to him, however, that he didn't even try to attack back. Even if she was crazy strong as he said, he could have easily attacked her as well with the surrounding flora. The fact that he didn't want to break his promise (because it is his freedom, of course) is notable. At least...he doesn't want to break it yet. ;)

    It's also ironic how Shun-jun decided to compliment Kurama on his strength. A bit odd and unexpected, and very interesting for that reason. There are so many ways you can take this story, and I'm really excited to see what you do. I'm definitely looking forward to some more Kurama-SDF and Kurama-Makai-SDF interaction. This should be good.
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  • From ANON - Maria on December 02, 2011
    I have to say that this is a very interesting story!! i do hope that you will update it soon!^^
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  • From NyteKit13 on November 28, 2011
    This is a very intriguing start. I like this premise you set up, and I can just imagine how uncomfortable being around the SDF makes Kurama. Can't wait to get to the meat of the story! If this is just chapter one, I'm sure the rest will not disappoint. :)
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  • From ANON - Sekah on November 06, 2011
    YOU FINALLY POSTED IT! YOU FINALLY POSTED IT! Oh gosh, now I can start telling people left and right to read this beautiful, beautiful fic. ^-^ I sincerely hope you consider posting it on Springtime, with all your fanfictions. :< You rock.
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