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Reviews for More Than Partners

By : Bane_Huntress
  • From ANON - S-Neo on October 16, 2012
    Interestingly enough, I actually finished the series during the summer and fell right back into the fandom. Yaoi fandom--but I had only seen it as KuramaxHiei, but then, after finishing the series, it seemed more appropriate for Hiei to be the seme, and I'm glad that this fic was such.

    I think you did a great job at portraying a hotheaded-yet-lovable Hiei. Making him a husband is no easy task, but I do believe hearts soften when truly at peace. The pregnancy bouts from Kurama was hilarious, and his kits sounded adorable! This fic actually took me the whole week to finish since it was so long, but I really enjoyed it. I would say more, but so much happened...GAH. You just did a good job in portraying everyone--even the Makai lords like Yomi and Mukuro (bless her heart ;u;. I'm not a fan of her being in a pairing, but I do like her by herself because she's a strong female lead.)

    It broke my heart at the near-end when Kurama barely escaped being violated by that...fiend. I felt no sympathy for the demon when Hiei ripped him up :/. This was a very lovely take on this couple with a family ;u;! Thank you for writing this. I really do believe you'll have more fans, it's just taking them a while to read this one-shot ^u-!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2012
    Good fic. Chapter format would have been better for readers (this is really long), but it was really enjoyable. There were some word mix-ups and misspellings. Why did Hiei always want to attack Yusuke ? :/.

    Overall very enjoyable.
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