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By : shanirah
  • From ANON - Mija on August 29, 2003
    omg that was just too priceless...still lmaoo...hehe just picturing hiei all hyper like a little oompa loompa chanting candy candy candy...lol..then hopping up and down on Kuwabara like a manic monkey...lol...this was truelly an awsome chapter I sooo luved it..great humor great chap and congrats on becoming an auntie..lol..till you update again be well safe and happy huggs Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - dunken on August 29, 2003
    that was great. so very amusing and i must admit, that was the most entertaining author's notes i have ever read. it was great! i loved it. the chapter was really fun too. oi, hiei on a sugar high, how funny. it was quite entertaining and i'm glad you were able to update before taking off. can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Lauren on August 19, 2003
    So totally kool so far!!!! I really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!! You are a great writer!!!
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 18, 2003
    as usual another great chapter..:-) reallved ved the scene when Raven and Heie were caught, then Kurama joined in..hehe cant wait to read how they act ar eac each other once the rest leave..hehe thats going to be good, cant wait..:-) ty for letting me know it was up..huggs Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - dunken on August 18, 2003
    wow! i liked that chapter. i thought it was really well written and i'm glad you were able to update so soon. i can't wait for the next update so please update soon! oh, by the way, how was the n... ressurected show (i've go no clue how to spell that)? i wanted to see it but i guess i missed it. oh well, anyway, please update soon as i can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Mystaea on August 15, 2003
    I really like this story, very original. I usually don't line super-power OC's in HP, but in YYH it works a lot better! Everyone is very well done and in character, and I have only one tiny point to make. In the show, Yukina NEVER calls Kuwabara by his family name the way everyone else does. She always calls him Kazuma, and now that they're married, I think it would be even more consistant. Also, are you going to introduce Shiziru? She's such a great character for Kuwabara bashing, and I think she and Raven teaming up on him and Yusuke would be priceless! Keep up the great story, I am really looking forward to more
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 15, 2003
    ooh I liked this chapter alot..:-) hope you feel better and although I cant wait to read more, I will be patient till you up aup and ready to write again, I know how things can get..be well and safe and happy..Huggs Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 13, 2003
    ooh this story just keeps getting better and better..(bites nails in anticipation of next chap) I soo cant wait to read the next one..I luv this story..:-) ty for letting me know it was up..:-) what else can I say except UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!...lol..huggs Mija :-)
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  • From ANON - dunken on August 12, 2003
    w gre great story line. and i don't usually like yaoi stories. probably not the best one to start out with but i still like it and i will continue to read it. so, that means, you need to continue to write it.
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 11, 2003
    lmaoooooooo omg this keeps getting better and better..and I loved the M/M lemon scene it was perfect..really liked it when they both stared at her chest and she offered to pull it up for them..hehe was priceless, and the way Kurama yelled Heies name when he offered to help wash her hair?? omg still laughing this was a great chap please update soo ok?? and ty sooo much for emailing me about the update, if you can still do it again when you update it would be fantistic if not I will come back and check to see if any new ones are posted, cant wait to read more..:-)
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  • From ANON - Susanna on August 09, 2003
    Hi! I'm an Italian girl (so, please, forgive me if my English is not very well...)
    I've read a lot of yyh fanfiction and I can tell that yours is VERY BEAUTIFUL and INTRIGUING... I) hope it will be a lemon soon! Go on writing!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 09, 2003
    ooh this story is sooooooooo cool, I dont get to read much of Yu Yu stories since my main intrest is Inuyasha but I do love Yu Yu and I would soo love it if you could be sooo kind in letting me know when you update..luv this story hope you update sooon please email me at BusinessMija@aol.com/ t...h...huggs Mija
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  • From songkiya on August 08, 2003
    this fic rocks!! update soon, pleaseeeee ^ ^
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