rate_review Reviews

i find this story to be pretty good, it is nice to read

Mesh Likes! Please continue!

I like this please contiue

Why'd...you leave it at that?! ::rubs hands together:: Let's see some hot Kurama action soon!! Spicy lemon!

J3

Now that's the way you do it. Well done!!!!!!! Please write more. I love this story. Let's get Kurama in this next chapter. Very hot. GREAT PAYOFF!!!!!!

Hey i think that was the best massage i ever heard of!! That was a very good chapte. Only one thing missing..Kurama? Where was his action??

You can do your lemon in the next chapter. You've done so well with this story so far. You're a good writer and very creative. However, if you're not able to write a lemon due to personal matters, i.e.: your parents. Then perhaps you should change your rating to "R". Because people who choose to reach "NC-17" are doing so for one reason only, and we all know what that is -lemons-! All I'm saying is that it's very disappointing to start reading a really good story, such as yours, and then not get the payoff in the end. Please find time to finish your fic the way I know you want to. Good Luck. KEEP WRITING, YOUR VERY TALENTED.

No disappointment on this side! Yummy chapter!

J3

hey this is a really good fic I cant wait to read more!! I diI didn't mind this chapter not being a lemony... I only wish the chapters were longer but hey keeps you waiting and wanting more!!! and you up-date a lot I check everyday cant wait to see what happens!!!

I think your writing is very good. I'm enjoying this story. I think you did a great job with the car ride, it's a slow build up. As for your upcoming lemon. Just take it one step at a time. And don't forget detail. People like to visualize what you're writing. I would take a little more time and make your next chapters longer. We all know how long other writers make us wait for an update. Why should you be any different. I don't mind waiting as long as it's good. Good luck. I'll be waiting. Chow for now.