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for The New Girl

by StarryEyedGal

person Anon
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can we say Mary-Sue? Why is everyone caring for this complete and perfect stranger? Your exposition really sucks.
person Angel
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story! it's so down to earth and real. i have a friend who was abused by her father, and Star's actions remind me of my friend. i hope you write more on it! please keep up the awesome work!!
~Angel
person Lintered
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice story, luv it...could you plz email me once the next chapter is up? thanks, keep it up! laterz
person Rioghnach
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor girl. I really feel sorry for her, lucklucky her she has Kurama there. :D
person Ashley
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have to update...
person katarica
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there ^_^ I like it so far. This means you should continue instantly! *points commandingly at keyboard*
*sweat drops as this brings to mind her own fic she hasn't updated in a month, sneaks off*
If you need me to help you spell check, just ask. *stickler for spelling, sue me*
^_^
person annonymous
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this is a really great story and i hope you update soon
person Ashley
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this is an awesome story and i cant believe only 4 people have reviewed, it'd be cool if you could send the updates to mail email address because i got excited when it said you posted an update but you only did some minor changes LOL, well hurry up and update because i wanna see moremoremore!!!
person Ashley
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and also I'm gonna keep bugging you until you update LOL
person Ashley
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im really bored....SO UPDATE!!! rofl..

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