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for The Pet Fox

by Amisteri

person Mau Rin
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks at the Nerf gun handed to her,blinks at it curiously and looks over the foamy,rounded arrow like thininteinted at her* Oooh,what's this? *she had noticed the trigger,slowly she put her fingertip on the peice of plastic and pushed forward* *FMOOP* @_@ Eyah... Shinpai shinaide..I'm ok.. *is on the floor* Good story so far.. Poor Kurama though..he always was very baitish.He just screams kidnap me,neh? I can't wait for another chapter. *sits up and glares at the toy gun,pushing it away from her* Just no more of those,okies? ;~;
person Lauren
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! This is great! I love it! Poor Kurama I feel so sorry for him! I hope Hiei and Yusuke get to him soon! And I also hope you update soon! I can't wait for more!^_^
person Alaskantiger
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the nextpterpter!! :)
person anon
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you deserve a treat for continueing. *gives treat* but now, you must add more. THE SUSPENSE KILLS!!!
person ko-krama
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Okey, here is my analysis of the ending part of Chapter 7. Kin (we'll start with him ^_^), well supposedly, he's dead. Unless the extra energy he got from the "encounter" that Kurai had with Kurama (yummy ^_^) made him come back to life. Although, that would only happen if Kurai and all his subordinates shared a link with one another (which I believe they do). But, when Kin was talking to Yuusuke and Hiei he didn't sound like the uneducated twerp he used to be which made me think it was a trap. Hui is dead too, so that leaves either Yato or Zei (cool names by the way). Either one could be in disguise, but I have the sneaky suspicion that Zei is the one who's tricking the "couplesome" for Kurai (he is the right hand man afterall). OR Kurai is controlling Kin's dead body ^_^ . I'm not saying that is what's happening, but it appears to be either one...maybe. Anyways, I absolutely love this story! Please don't end such wonderful material too quickly. Sorry for the long review. Toodles ^_^ .
person Niko-Sama
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shoots nerf gun at everyone else who has one and then steals them* MAHAHA! I AM THE NERF QUEEN! Also.... *clings to you* chapter so wonderful! now write more! or The Nerf Queen shall destory all!!!!!!
person mz.bitz.
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! ::grasps heart and falls on ground anime style:: wow. please dont leave us hanging for long! great job so far =]
person anon
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you haven't updated in a really long time! come on! i love this fic! must i beg?! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!
person Nicki
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah you can say that you are evil man i wait a fuckin long time to get to some good tender juicie part and what do you go and do you fuckin go and cut it off right then and there oh i'm goin be so ma you you that i am not takin the time to rant at you any longer just mail me when the new chapt comes kay later oh and i love it
person Nicki
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah you say say that you are evil man i wait a fuckin long time to get to some good tender juicie part and what do you go and do you fuckin go and cut it off right then and there oh i'm goin be so mad at you that i am not takin the time to rant at you any longer just mail me when the new chapt comes kay later nd ind i love it

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