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This is still one of my all-time favorite one-shots!! I love the tidbits about how Hiei and Inuyasha deal with each other. Ah! Hiei/Kag goodness, -- you just can't beat it. You need to write MORE!!!

its was a good story if i wrote a storiy like that i put kurama instand of hire why dont u put kurama in your story too u can made a 3 guys and one woman try that and see how it sound ok and u could write a story and put these 3 guys in it. It would sound cool i read a story like that why dont u do one too ok from blondefox

it was great and everyone pretty much stayed in character. and that is not an easy thing to do. dont think ur anything less thank awesum.
ryoko-chan =-_________-=v

...................................................woooooooooooooooow............................kewl!

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters.

WOW i really enjoyed your fanfic
i was great, please contuie you to update this i would like to see where its going. tha
thanks for the great read.

I thought that was great and hot. Thanks for the one shot. Gotta luv Hiei and Kagome pairings.

that was good keep up i love it. try some more one shots. you know like kumra and kag or a three way with hiei kag kur

Nah, the lemon wasn't bad, it was descent(well...actually...indescent! ^__^)! I hope it helped your muse! Maybe you need to really shock your muse, like try a really bizarre crossover. You have started a crossover between Kagome and Hiei, how about something really different linuyanuyasha and Shizuru (or maybe Keiko). I can't say that I have seen anything with those couples. Actually...smirk... Shizuru and Sesshoumaru, now that would be feisty! You could always listen to some really hot music and see where your thoughts go.