rate_review Reviews

Waa-haaaa! *makes funny sounds* I finally came back to you! I just now got all of my school matters settled so that I've made myself a couple of free hours every day for internet related activities. (took me two months to get everything settled again, damnit) I've almost finished my story, and whilst I wait on people to vote on whether they want a happy or a sad ending, I suddenly had time to come search out and finish reading your story! Very very nice! ^_^ As of 1 am last night I had my final chapter up... as of 9 am this morning I had deleted the chapter and changed everything. I had the obligatory lemon and happy ending, but decided that was no good. While uncertain of a happy or sad ending (I have two possible scenarios in my head, you see) I am pretty certain the audience will not be given a lemon. I don't feel like there should be a lemon there, and like you pointed out, writing a lemon just because others expect it makes for a crappy lemon.
and what's the point in a lemon if no one can get off to it?
I loved your story. The number of view points, past thoughts, current lines, and future line branches you just dealt with is amazing and I simply must bow. *bows*
NOW GET TO WORK ON YOUR NEXT STORY! *cracks whip* You've shown in this that your writing is taking leaps with each peice, and I can't wait to see what you're up to next. ;)

So not only are you a talented writer, you are also a great artist! Just like my mom! Wow! Great Job on everything!

OMG i was scared i wasnt going to be able to update because this page wouldnt connect and i had to keep refreshing! lols. anyway. i loved the last chapter, the happy forever after but not too fairy tale ish feeling.. its so beautiful! =D and im still loving the line "like the fact that they had really spent very little time 'resting' the previous night as she had ordered. " LOLS.

THat was great! Thanks alot! You rock!

OOOO, sequel please. That was very good. I am so happy for them all, it all worked out alright.

Wow...another wonderful chapter! I'm glad to see Yusuke and Keiko resolve their problems and can't wait to see how Hiei and Kurama handles their's. Keep up the great work and I shall be haunting this site until the next update. ~Kenya

GRRRRRRRRRR!!!! You are fucking EVIL!!!!! gRRRRRGggggggggggggggggggRGrGrgRrgrGrGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGgggggggggggggggRggRR

HEY!!!!! Your really evil!

o0o0olalas. and thats all i can say now cus i have no idea what to say. lols. update soon! =]

Nice, nice. Keep up the good work