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for Loss Of Control

by serenestorm

person Alaskantiger
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good fic so far.
person katarica
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So short! I love it though. The simplistic, short style are fitting. More detail perhaps? But no, it is his thoughts, they would not be more detailed. *Cmplamplates it*
I just think it's too short. But then, I like to have more for my hungry eyes to devour.
;)
*thumbs up* I like.
person Alaskantiger
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Desturbing. Very Destubering. I can't spell. This is an intresting story. Twisted but intresting. :)
person Katy
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was intersting.

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