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for Partners by Moonlight

by ShadowsCall

person Aenima
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, awesome chapter. I'm pretty sure that this story is currently my favorite on aff.net. You're doing a great job, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Hands off the lettuce! - the bunny
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ma, ma!! Bad Kruo-chan, dont be so mean to poor Kurama!!! ^^

Hehe..I like how Kuro-chan's turning into one of those angsty, depressed bishounen...it's so funny! ^^

And I can't wait for Kurama's revenge...*evil hentai grin* Eto..not that I'm a pervert or anything *innocent halo*

Suza ammused me, which is odd because I usuually hold quite a grudge against any and all OCs. However, you write them into the story so well, that they actually feel real, instead of those 2-D Mary Sue type characters you always see. Way to go!!! ^^

Anyways...keep writing, and I can't wait to read chapter 10!!!
person boing...boing...boing....NINJA!
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Must everything in this damn world be carnivorous?” <-- Adored this line....it Rocked!!! ^^

*laughs* Oh man...just...oh man. *has died of laughter by now* Poor Kuro-chan!!!! XD

*still isn't sure how to stop laughing long enough to type something*

Anyways...go Kurama!! That was a funny lesson!!!!! ^^ But be nice to Kuro-chan, he luvels you!!! ^^

Mah, mah...Verasha-sama, I still worship you! I would NEVER have been able to pull off a chapter like that!!! x.x;; *burns the pathetic fanfics behind her back*
Keep up the awesome work, oh most humorous and yaoi-ish one!!!! *bows down and worships the yaoi*
person Boing..the ninja hath returnedeth
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eek! My previous review didn't work all the way! Here's what it was supposed to say:

Must everything in this damn world be carnivorous?” I Adored this line....it Rocked!!! ^^

*laughs* Oh man...just...oh man. *has died of laughter by now* Poor Kuro-chan!!!! XD

*still isn't sure how to stop laughing long enough to type something*

Anyways...go Kurama!! That was a funny lesson!!!!! ^^ But be nice to Kuro-chan, he luvels you!!! ^^

Mah, mah...Verasha-sama, I still worship you! I would NEVER have been able to pull off a chapter like that!!! x.x;; *burns the pathetic fanfics behind her back*
Keep up the awesome work, oh most humorous and yaoi-ish one!!!! *bows down and worships the yaoi*
person Aenima
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I'm glad you updated this, I had been missing it. ^_^; Thanks for the great story, I'm really enjoying it.
person Avari
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH YOU KNOW I LOVED IT! GIVE ME MORE SOON!
person SpiritFighter
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ yaye! another chapter! ooh, I wonder what Kurama meant by "learning his place"? @_@ I hope it's nothing too horrible. Update soon!
person hell\'s kitty
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHHH *whacks you with pillow* why arent you UPDATING!!! need more!!! more!!!! MHHAHAHAHAHA!!! *cough* um sorry bout that. my evil side kinda took over there for a. an. an-e-whoses, this is one of THE best fics i have ever read! ^^ nice plot and EXTREMLY well written! and a really sweet lemon^-' *kurama was bottom*sqeals* and now out of the most stubborness of my being *cough*that didnt make sense*cough* would you as so kindly, UPDATE!!!!! *takes deep breath and calms down* than you. and oh! i almost forgot! when you do update pls e-mail me! i would be ever so grateful *sweet smile w/ puppy dog eyes* thanks! ^-'
person kara
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great. PLZ Update soon. ^_^
person SatoTakai
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I didn't even like this pairing until I read this story. Kuroune kinda scares me... *shudder* Anyway, you are doing a great job, and I look forward to reading more.
Ja ne!

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