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for Partners by Moonlight

by ShadowsCall

person Aenima
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a very gifted writer. Every single thing you wrote played out perfectly inside of my head. I really love this story, and I really love the fact that you made this a Kuroune/Kurama pairing..aren't enough out there.
person Ninja bunny go Boing!
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOOO!!!! THAT ROCKED!!!! *whistles and cheers*

Actually...it was really sad, too...Poor guy!!! *is a bit depressed now* But I liked how you brought his character back in, even if he did have to die...Stupid tanuki!!! *gives rabbies to the tanuki*

However...on a lighter note: FLUFF!!! IT WAS ALL SO CUTE!!!!!!! *does the fluff happy dance* Keep up the fluff, please?

It seemed to be a bit different style than your other chapters, because the paragraphs were a bit larger. But either way, it's still cool. ^^ Don't stop writing, or the penguins of doom shall bring havoc upon your pineapples!!

Hehe..sorry. ^^; Can't wait until the next chapter!!!! If it's anything like this, it'll be awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person rhi-chan
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omfg...you have no idea how much i freagin love this story and this couple.
This fic had made my day. And I absolutely love it.
But i'm so mad at the same time.You know why...?
CAUSE THE STORY FREAKIN ENDED!!!!. Thats not fair
I would absolutely worship you if you updated really REALLY soon.
Oh god...i love this fic.It's one of my favorites yet andi have many.
But please (tries to hold in tears) PLEASE update for me soon,and all the others.
i would be sooooo gosh darn happpyyy....but can i ask a favor of you...
I know that i will never find this story again ...so would you (you dont have to)
send it to me by e-mail ...andi am also at ~SesshomaruSama99@aol.co*bow*bows down* ja.....*heaven music playing in background*
person The bunny who\'s riddi
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww...I'm not sure whether to be glad that there's finally a character without a hero complex, or to be really sad for his little brother.

Hehe..that pervy old man! They manage to show up everywhere, don't they? ^^;; And that woman was a bit..interesting, too...^^;;; But who am I to judge demons?

It was a much more..I dunno. Overall, I feel the mood of this chapter, especially towards the end, was a lot more subdued, and sad. *sniffs, because she's an over-emotional little nerd*

But, I must say: THANK YOU! Fot got giving Kuroune one of those oh-so-irritating hero complexes, where the character feels they must save everyone. I think that you showed a moment of Kuroune's character that is starting to show us him as a full character. Before now, both him and Kurama seemed a bit more childish, and goofy. But with the slave-trading moment, it really put it into perspective how they are still thieves, and do have a bit of the thief mentality. So, thank you for not sugar-doating everything, and for not skipping over the darker aspects of their personalities. It really brought the two characters to life, a lot more.

Wow...I wron acn actual *review*. What's wrong with me?!?!*the*the ninja bunny disappears in a cloud of smoke, while leaving a basof gof goodies*
person Aenima
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh, yay you updated ^-^. This is my favortie coupling and it saddens me not to see more stories like thses out there.. ={, nice stroy and very very gald you updated.
person Katy
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! you updated!! Oh and it was soo good!! i am so excited!! Please update soon!!
person Ninja bunnies have struck again!
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O

WOW.

*Is vividly replaying that little...scene.*

That was.......VERY well done...*is now suffocating on her own drool*

Alright..enough of my temporary stupidity when shown more of your absolutely awesome skills...not only do you write well in general, you write great hentai scenes!!! You ARE god!!!!!!

And you made Kuroune on top!!!!!! WHOOOOO HOOOOO!!!!

*has issues*

Anyways...*is still in partial shock* What can I say? You're an absolutely awesome writer! *proud to be your #1 fan*

*waves little banners* I bow down to your greatness!


*is now re-reading over the review* Wow...I have no life, do I? In that case...I shall dedicate my lifeless little life to waiting for the next chapter. BWAHA!

*nerd and proud*
person k b
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was really great!!!!!!!!!! thanks ofr taking my request......... infact u did it better than i had expected!!!!!!!!!! oh pls write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait for updates!!!!!!!!! but pls take ur time, dont want pushing u ne? anyways, u take care and dont forabouabout ur fans here waiting ok??? *hugs* bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jeep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!! : )
person Katy
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know there is not that many good Kuronue/Kurama stories? I must admit i love how you wrote this. I also must say that i look so forward to more from you. Please keep it up!
person Stealthy bunnies of ninja-ness
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Argggg!!!! *eats the mentos guy*

BAD MR. MENTO!!! GARRRRR!!!

Noooo!!! KURAMAAAAAAAA!!!!

Ok..no more spazzy fangirl! *gets out blasters and blasts the mentos guy into itty bitty pieces* Diediediediedie!!!!

Uh...sorry about that..O.O;;;

Anyways! Ooh, another very very well written chapter, but that's no surprise! ^^ Hehe..it seems that timing is everything, no? And the itty bitty of Kof Kuroune and Kurama fluff was just TOO CUTE!!!! *huggles* Very dear to my heart. ^^ PLEASE continue writing or I'll die!

Still loves this line: drove the kitsune batty

*gives her balloons* Hehe...I'm running out of gift ideas! But don't worry, I 'll perservere..even if it means resorting to bananas!!!Hehe...

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