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for Partners by Moonlight

by ShadowsCall

person Aenima
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is just getting better and better, I really hope to see more
person mz.bitz.
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOLS. i lthisthis fic so far i cant believe i forto rto review so many times arggs. ::slaps forehead:: im looking forward to updates. hehe. the other way to work for his keep.. HEHE ^^; update soon!
person SpiritFighter
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaye! another chapter(s)! It's coming together so nicely. Ooh, I hope Kuro-chan finally gets his revenge on his father! *pouts* neeways, Please update when you can.
person phoenix
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice! when was it cause is this suppose to happen like before kurama got killed cause then that would be around 1000 years ago and then we wouldn't have had pots and pans then.....oh well.forget everything i said =P but reli good i will be waiting for the next chapter
person And the ninjas have returned...
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!!! Soooooo cuuuuuttttteeeeeee!!!!

Hehe...now that that's out of my system...

FLUFF!!! WRITE MORE!!!!

*clears throat* As I was saying, now that my spastic fangirlish-ness is out of my system, all I can say is.....WOW. O.O That was awesome! ^^ Another brilliant chapter, filled with action, humor, a bit of angst, great plot developement, a beautifully written chapter, and, of course, fluff. (Hehe...can't frget the fluff!! SER SERIOUSLY applaud you!!!

Hehe...so there WILL be lemons, eh? *happy dance* I mean, uh..I'm innocent, I have no idea what those are. *innocently whistleing* The point that we're on an adult fanfiction site can be totally ignored....eh heh heh...

Anyways...Lemony goodness to come! ROCK ON!!!! *extremely happy - happy dance* They're such a cute couple. <3 <3 <3 And with you're writing to dish it out, well...all I can say is I'll be very much eagerly awaiting the next chapters! Hehe!

Until than...have fun! ^^ Don't get hurt! *gives her Kuroune and Kurama plushies with magnets in their hands and...other...areas...* Look! They grope each other!

It's the Return of the Groping Bishie Plushies, hehe! (TM)
person Aenima
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nccccccccccceeeeeeeeee, I absolutly love this! update soon :)
person Silent Dreamer
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. =) Please continue. Will there be enemies once those two became partners?
person k b
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey!!!!!!!!!!! pls continue the fic???????????????????????? pls?? pls??? pls??? ilove koronue/kurama paring!!!!!!!!!!!! can i ask for an request??? pls, if ur gonna put a lemon, pls make *sweat drop* make kurama.................... the uke? pls???? thank u very mych!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur fic is fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls e-mail me when u update this fic??? ok? take care and good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person and the ninja bunny strikes again
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What? Cliff hanger? NOOOOO!!!!! IT BURNSSSS USSSS!!!!!!!!!! AI IIIII!!! *spins around while clutching above heart, than falls over, dead*

Hehe, ok...I'm fine. Poor everyone. ^^;

Hmm....yippee! Another chapter!! I loved the part where Kuroune (Did I spell that right? Ooooh boy...o.o;; ) Was teasing Kurama about them sounding like a married couple...it was so cute!!!!!! Heehee...^^ *huggles print out of story*

Hmm...as for what else? Wow...nice battle scenes! ^^ Very nice and descriptive, without becoming boring and lengthy! Yeay! (Yes, that\ow Iow I spell yeay. Heehee. Any Anyways...*waves the little Go Verasha! banners some more* Update, please! Until than, I won't be able to pay attention in class! ^^

Wait...I never do...uh...anyways!
*sheepish giggles*

Update, I beg of you! ^^ *hands her a basket of strawberry stuff* Cause strawberry is the best! Yea! Ok...well...um..that basket's switchable with any other fruit, if need be. ^^
person Aenima
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great, mostt fight scenes/training scenes I've ever read in fanfiction are crap, but your's was awesome! I got a clear picture of the entire thing in my head..great job ^-^; Keep it up..

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