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for Just One Bite

by Hieikoibito

person Koorime1905
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do this fic very good.I like all your ideas but you won't write a death fic,right?.don't make that bastard(sorry)Karasu rapes my Kurama.If you do that Hiei and me will kill you at once
person The Black Angel
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me:^_^Great story so far PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!
Mai(OC):*In a cheerleader outfit*Give me a U-P-D-A-T-E, what dose that spell??
Rein,Kiki,and Zack(OC):*Also in a cheerleader outfit* UPDATE!!!!!!
Me:0_0
person ko-krama
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more... I'm dying of grief here! I feel like it's my fault you're not writing more... is it? I'm really sorry... just... please write more. I honestly love this fic to death- it's a smart deviation froe noe norm. Otheill ill love it too, I know it!

The only thing is... you HAVE to change the M/F rating in the summary. Since it's Hiei and Kurama we're dealing with, it would me Male/Male. Please?

Much Love,
Ko-krama
person ko-krama
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! I'm sorry no one's reviewing. I thought that if I reviewed, other people would start doing it too. Oh well, anyway - at least you know I love this story ^_^ . Maybe this story would be more appealing if you changed the pairing on the summary? Since this is yaoi, it would be M/M not M/F - if you leave it at M/F people are probably gunna think this is a "Mary-Sue" story or something of the like. Would you also mind spacing the paragraphs, please - it would be a lot easier to read it then ^_^ . Okey, sorry for bothering you. Bye now.
person ko-krama
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there ^_^ . I just happened to notice that you weren't getting any reviews so...I'm gunna review 'cause this isamn amn good story and you're a damn good writer! There, I said it. Thanks for updating. I can't wait for more ^_^ . Toodles.

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