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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey
Overall I think it's a good story, but you might want to consider going through and proofreading it. There are quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes. You could also be a little more descriptive, but other than that good job. Keep up the good work!!
Overall I think it's a good story, but you might want to consider going through and proofreading it. There are quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes. You could also be a little more descriptive, but other than that good job. Keep up the good work!!