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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
'awwwwwwww' or 'hahahahahahaha!' were my main reactions while reading this. i kept going back and forth between the two - and sometimes i did both at the same time!
this is one of the best yyh fics i've ever read and definitely the best yyh hetero fic. and if this becomes a lemon - hint, hint - then it'll be the best yyh lemon ever written!
- runs away laughing maniacally -
this is one of the best yyh fics i've ever read and definitely the best yyh hetero fic. and if this becomes a lemon - hint, hint - then it'll be the best yyh lemon ever written!
- runs away laughing maniacally -
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've never read a kurama/keiko pairing before, this story got me to like this pairing. I liked the way you made the characters, you changed youko persanality into a better one. Without making any of cha characters out of character, and silly like other authors. And I liked the way you got Keiko to like both sides of kurama, shuiichi, and youko, without picking which one of them she'd liked better. And you gave it plot, which I am very thankful that you did. Other authors like to start a story on adultfanfiction.net with just porn, without plot. It gets tiring after awhile. And I hope you continue with this story, I'd like to know the ending of it.
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more pweese?
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! This story is so much fun. ^_^
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! the way they all interact is fan-freaking-tastic!
update soon, plz!
update soon, plz!
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well.if what he told her at the end of chapter 3 dosen't cause a lemon .....
....nothing will! Great chapter,can't wait for the next update.
....nothing will! Great chapter,can't wait for the next update.
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! I really like this story! However, I can't believe you will be able to end this in three chapters, maybe four (either that or the third chapter is ging to be long -I have noooo problem with that ^_^). Anyway, now that you have left the story on an evil cliffhanger, I do hope you are going to update sooon!!!!!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is a FANTASTIC story! The 2 chapters you've got up so far are simply AMAZING! Don't keep us waiting in suspense too long - update soon!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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wow
i'm speechless at your talent. it was so sexy and hot and humorous and suspenseful and just so damn well-written that i'm amazed you can combine all those qualities into what little you've got ging on so far.
please continue asap!
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wow
i'm speechless at your talent. it was so sexy and hot and humorous and suspenseful and just so damn well-written that i'm amazed you can combine all those qualities into what little you've got ging on so far.
please continue asap!