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Hey took you long enough although i shouldn't say anything cause i myself have stop writting and picked up another hobby for the meantime but anyway you updated and it was okay chapter and quit giving excuse and just hurry and write more. =)
and I have no clue who the heck is your mystery person I'll tell Jorgie boy to give it a shot. Anyways see ya later.

Aawww......this next chapter is going to be so sad......if Yusuke takes Hiei, the poor fire-baby will freak out...and Yusuke doesn't know about his "stages" that he goes through during the day......although, that would give Kurama an opportunity to get him back....hmmmm......oh, well! I'm just really glad that you updated!!! (finally... ^^;; ) I can't wait to find out what happens, expecially when Hiei returns to normal, so please: keep up the good work and update ASAP!!! Oh, and just a random guess here...actually, it's really stupid, but the only "Demon God" that I could remember who ever remotely matched your description was Majari from the YYH Movie......then again, I haven't seen that many of the TV shows, so I don't have many to choose from....*shrugs* ...oh, well....just a guess....... bye!!!

YOU UPDATED! HURRAH! HALLELUIA! When i first saw this I was like "OHMYGODOHMYGOD SHE UPDATED!:breathing very fast: ICAN'T BELEIVE IT!" Yeah that was it. It wasn't as good as the other chapters,(I'm sorry to say) but it was good. I can't wait for your next update. I'm also telling people about this cool site I found with really cool Hiei/Kurama, Hiei/Yusuke, and even Hiei/Kurama/Yusuke/Koenma fanfics. The adress is //b-chan1.tripod.com/market.htm. You should check it out, let me know if you like it. I recomend 'Forbbiden Love' for the first story. If you do or you don't, just Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^

Hello, I really like this story, I was wondering if you are going to up date it, because it is a really good story.

This Is the onley Non lemon i ever kept reading But I want Lemon And I Want MORE SO Pleas do me the favor of posting a new chapter soon Im going to loos my minde if you dont soon

hey....this is a great story. It's very enjoyable and it's very touching. I surely can't wait for you to update. Write more ASAP! I like it alot it's just so kawaii!!!!!!!!

This is the best story ON AFF.net. It's been what, A month since you updated? Don't do that to me! T_T I need good writting. I can't stand PWP's. But I do wish to compliment you on your long chapters. This is a pretty funny story. Keep it up and if you don't update I'll hunt you down. Ciao.

i hate my self for liking this stuff so much.i find yoai disguating but i can't help liking it.

I know I already reviewed your story, but I found this site that has a fanfic SIMILAIR to yours. //members.tripod.com/~Bulma_Briefs/
fanfic_chambers.html, that is the site adress. The fic is called, 'The Hallway To - Every Cloud has a Silver Lining'. It's about when Hiei gets turned into a baby by fairy demon thingys.Later in chapter five, Hiei gets turned into a five-year-old. That is the part I want you to read. Especially chapters, 6&7. Maybe it could give you an idea about this fic. Me and my killer sister are waiting for a new chapter,
and we're getting tired. My sister: I will kill if I don't see another chapter soon! Mea: She means it. Anyway, please take my advice,(that fanfic is refunnfunny) and PLEASE update soon, SWEET SNOW, SUGAR, and a CHERRY ON TOP.
P.S. I still think your fic is better than hers.^_~.

I love it! Thank you for having a real story ... I must admit I've missed them in the wake of the self-inserts/CYOA stories that have been running rampant through ficdom. I think I've only found one? maybe two that had a story line interesting enough to follow them.

As long as I can find this (or if you send me an update notice) I'll be happy to come back and read whames mes next!