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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Hot stuff. And with suprising twists that one wouldn't expect from a one part pwp. And this is so much better because of it. There's a lot of feeling behind this, not just sex or a quick 'I love you.' It's so much more.
And you should be proud. Terrific work.
And you should be proud. Terrific work.
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was great. Even though you had some typos in there. Thats fine No one perfect, and I can't spell. Anyway i love your stories so much thought and heart is put in them.
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh, definitely psychological, this one. i adored this fic even more that the 'one last night' fic. the two different perspectives, the twist behind the game when it was revealed - this is honestly the best k/k lemon i've read in the yyh fandom.
not that there are that many of them, but there should be. i hope you write more because i'll definitely read it.
not that there are that many of them, but there should be. i hope you write more because i'll definitely read it.
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No matter how many times I read this, I'm still impressed at the thought and complexity by a one-shot lemon. It's not just smut; it makes you think. Well, me anyway. Heh. Who knows what the other lemon-reading perverts out there think?
To put it simply - I love this!
To put it simply - I love this!
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot stuff! awesome stuff! do more! XD
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely.
Hot.
That was very good.
Write stories more often.
*commands!*
;)
Hot.
That was very good.
Write stories more often.
*commands!*
;)
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Though I am all for the kurama/botan pairing, you left me breathless with your story. I was looking for a fic where the naughty readhead made use of his plants in imaginative ways... and your story was simply what I was hoping for.
So let me tell you that this was a piece of very enjoyable and nicely written smut, but also with deep feelings and a heart when it comes to its end so you didn´t leave anything out.
Caught in the game simply deserves the highest rating this page grants, so I praise you for writing skills
keep it coming!
Though I am all for the kurama/botan pairing, you left me breathless with your story. I was looking for a fic where the naughty readhead made use of his plants in imaginative ways... and your story was simply what I was hoping for.
So let me tell you that this was a piece of very enjoyable and nicely written smut, but also with deep feelings and a heart when it comes to its end so you didn´t leave anything out.
Caught in the game simply deserves the highest rating this page grants, so I praise you for writing skills
keep it coming!
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
I mean- WOW. That was a beautifully written story. More! More!
I mean- WOW. That was a beautifully written story. More! More!
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was realy good!!
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah, hot! sexy! good! XD