rate_review Reviews

Wow. I like this a lot. Very creative and imaginative. Great job!!!!! The lemon was fine for the situation Hiei is in. I do hope that you don't kill any of our boys off though, but it is your story so do whatever you want. I'll still read it, although, I will cry if you kill Hiei !_! Can't wait for more.

Chilling, disturbing, and very, very dark. *grin* I like. Not to mention well-written. Extremely well written. Keep it down, sis- you might just run be out of business at this rate. *wink* Regardless, it'll be interesting to see what happens. Though I'm not much of a yaoi fan (i.e. not at all) I'm looking forward to seeing this in it's entirety...

Well... You could space out the paragraphs... I had a hard time follo the the story because stuff was running together. There was something going on with Hiei's tattoo that I didn't quite get... Is it gone or something?

Ah thanks! Now I got an idea of where this story's going! That's one evil lady... I hope that Hiei's escapes or somebody rescues him. ^__^ Well, goodbye until the next chapter!