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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww what a sweet ending, good job!
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! Can't wait till the next one! :D
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi ya! I really enjoyed this part of "The Betrayal." Indeed, it made me sad at times, but it was nice. I can't wait till you write the next part for "The Betrayal." If you do and have time, please email me. I'm always busy, so often I don't have time to check. Also I would gladly appreciate it if you did. Thank you very much. ~Kaori.
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think Keiko should try to use the dragon...........just a thought. Anyway I really love your story, great plot! I have never read a H/K/K story before and I think this one is great! Update as soon as possible, I know you have a lot of other stories that you are working on.
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot story. Very well written. Great lemon between Hiei/Kurama/Keiko. I like how you explained Yusuke's feelings towards Keiko, that he really thought she was the one when he had sex with her. That he didn't use her. The person I am pissed at is Botan. I think she is such a bitch. She was supposed to be Keiko's friend and then betrays her as well. Sorry. I just hate when girls steal other girls boyfriends or husbands. I am glad that it all worked out in the end for everybody, so far at least. Can't wait for more. Please hurry.
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keiko wondered how would Kuwabra act? Simple he would want to beat Yusuke up. Kazuma got Yusuke in a headlock when he first met Botan, threatening him that he better not be cheating on Keiko. I think Kazuma Kuwabara sees Keiko as a surrogate younger sister.
Hiei-Kieko-Kurama
Yusuke-Botan
Now the only other pairing that needs to happen is Kazuma-Yukina. Now that Hiei is mated and feels what it's like to love someone unconditionally, I whould hope he wouldn't object to Kazuma being with his sister.
Hiei-Kieko-Kurama
Yusuke-Botan
Now the only other pairing that needs to happen is Kazuma-Yukina. Now that Hiei is mated and feels what it's like to love someone unconditionally, I whould hope he wouldn't object to Kazuma being with his sister.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still so so good! I loved that chapter. Update more frequently! argh!
I cannot wait to see what happeneds, will she become pregnant?! omg! haha..eh
whos kid will it be? Eh... *confused, but happy*
Kurama is soo hoooooooooot! *drools*
I cannot wait to see what happeneds, will she become pregnant?! omg! haha..eh
whos kid will it be? Eh... *confused, but happy*
Kurama is soo hoooooooooot! *drools*
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh nicely done
man all your fanfics are good
your very talented
thanks for the great read
man all your fanfics are good
your very talented
thanks for the great read
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was ... so good! Argh! You rock o.O;;
*bows in deep respect before the hentai master*
~sigh~
*bows in deep respect before the hentai master*
~sigh~
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl you know you need to continue this story. And make them have something like a threesome, or what happends when everyone finds out.