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for The Betrayal

by vampmistress76

person Alvida
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought having the dragon come off of Hiei's arm was way cool, uh, hot.
person LosingGrip
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Since I've never read anything but Kurama/Hiei I wasn't sure about this one, but it called to me so I answered.
I have to say, it really is a good story, if you update I'll be sure to finisadinading it. I myself can't wait to read
what happens next, of course that in it's self suprised me, since like I said before I've only read Kurama/Hiei.
You my dear make this straight couple readable, Good-Luck with the rest of it and may your muses always be
full of ideas. ^____^!!!!!
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what a beautiful story i loved it
great job
i cant wait for more
thanks for the great read.
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Hiei and Keiko fics and this one is great. I love that you gave Keiko a dragon on her arm too as part of the mating. Very creative. I really can't wait to see the look and Yusuke and Botons face when they see Hiei and Keiko mated. Keiko should have her dragon bitch slap Yusuke a few times just for the hell of it. Well I can't wait for the next chapter. Just awesome.
person Alaskantiger
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I can't wait to read more! It'd be intresting to find out Yusuke's reaction to Hiei and Keiko being together? Please hurry with the next chapter! I can't wait to read mo :)
:)
person Dark topaz
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
plese u got ue Dae

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