rate_review Reviews

I just read the first 4 chapters and I am hooked. Please continue. I had no problem following the sequence of the story, so I don't know what that other reviewer's problem was.

Still Great. Update soon PLEASE! Quite putting urself down ur not a bad writer..its really good. But PLEEEZ dont make Hiei mad at Yusuke or Kurama! Maybe a threesome ;)

This story just gets better and better. You have to continue. You are doing such a great job. DO NOT DOUBT YOURSELF. Thank you for the longer chapter, you rock my world. I love the fact that you're going to have Hiei as a jealous rival for Yusuke, but I hope Yusuke wins. Hiei has enough fics out their with the fox LOL. Let someone else have a turn, like Yusuke. But I think it's a great idea to have Hiei rock the boat a little, ne. Anyway, I hope that your R rating turns into an NC17, just because I'm a major hentai and I love Kurama/Yusuke sex. Yum, Yum. Hurry with the next chapter. Good Luck!!!!!!!

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

whoa! please write more! Damn I need more! You're writing is alright. There is stuff much worse than yours! Trust me, i've seen it. GREAT STORY!

YAY!!! you update, which makes me happy!!!^_^ If you want to make me MORE happy UPDATE AGAIN!!! Your story ROCKS

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*1,000 years later*

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Great! Please continue. I like this pairing, and so far it has a great plot. Dont make Hiei too harsh on Yusuke and Kurama if he finds out. I hate it when any of the three of them fight =( ..... Awesome story..please continue!

I think this is a great story. I'm really enjoying it. I love any story with Yusuke in it. I would like to ask if you could make your chapters a little longer. Good job so far. I'm really looking forward to how this all unfolds.

The sequence of events os almost impossible to follow. What's going on?