rate_review Reviews

bout damn time someone had a Sensui and Itsuki pairing great job really it was wicked.

Off the chain crazy loved it really got into their intimatecy love.Hey I want to make a quick request for self-insertion fanfic with the reader and Sensui or the reader and Itsuki I would really apriciate if you could do that for me I can never find any like that on web anymore I mean wtfm sucks don't it

Ehh...this fic is so-so. You don't really have any of Sensui and Itsuki's personality quirks, which makes Sensui/Itsuki so damn hot in the first place. It actually seems like an "Any Two Guys" fic. But you have a rather good use of the English language. (This is not a flame, BTW. It's one to grow on.)

*mumbles* am to logged in. Er...ignore that. I liked it, but most of it wasn't physically possible. I know for a fact that Itsuki is tal, adn Sensui is tallas well. You made it seem as though, one was shorter then the other. *gigglied* quit making me think of two other sexy demons! I'm not supposed to be thinking like that right now! Oh well. The lemon was good, just not physically possible. Ja! ~Ys

Sqeeeeeeeee! I love this! *huggles Sensui & Itsuki plushies before handing them to the author* I'll miss 'em but you deserve 'em!

Hooray, my favorite pairing!
The grammer was sticky in a few places, but other than that it was great hon