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by mhmartini

person Eyes of Ra
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was awesome! ^_^ i FINALLY got around to reading everything i missed.. stupid not having internet access.... just another reason family is awesome. lol. ^_^ i still think its all beautifully written. *smiles*
person hatochiisai
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is fabulous, and just gets better and better! I hope to see another chapter soon!
person tlw44
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write more it is graet
person johin
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to comment that: I thought Hatanaka, Kazuya was a doctor? and Why hadn't Kurama, tied the scarf on Hiei to add pressure then run like crazy for the house? All in all though I think the story is great. :)
person Everqueen
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. i liked the previous one too. Sorry, been busy. Great way for the family to pull closer together, but poor hiei. Can't wait to read more.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tense with anicipation as to what will happen to Hiei* Don't die!!! You can't die!!! Kurama needs you!!!!! *breaks down into uncontrollable sobs* ^^ Yes, it is very late, and "they" have still not returned the hour which "they" stole from me. *glares at the general location of these unknown entities* Give it back, dammit!!! It's mine!!! I need it to survive!!! ^^ Okay, let me correct myself: it's not late. It's just really, reeeeeeally early........ ^___~ Thanks for updating!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Oh, and I look forward to reding the story that comes before this one -- good luck with finishing both of them!!! ^___^ Ja ne!!!
person maya
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAKING HIEI ON THE VIRGE OF DIEING! HOW COULD U????????????????????????????????????????????????? ;.; soooo mean n making kurama worry like that! U BETTER MAKE HIEI WELL AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;.; ;.; ;.; ;.; ;.;
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are amazing. I love this story. Everytime I read a new chapter I am drawn in all over again. Thank you so much for updating as soon as you did. I really hope you update again soon as I would like to find out if Hiei makes it. I am happy again to see that the family is drawing closer and closer together. ::Smiles:: Keep up the good work, and you're an awesome writer. I hope to see you update again soon.
person youkaiblood
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...kurama is awsome!
person CitizenCobalt
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank God! I thought Hiei was going to die a moment there! Poor Hiei. Those last two chapters almost had me crying! But Hiei's getting better! Yay! What happens next? Of course Hatanaka should apologize. Yes, definitely. It's nice that Shuuichi is looking up to Hiei. Couldn't ask for a better role model. Not with rules and stuff, but definitely for the good parts in life. Yep.

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