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by Ametank

person Tabi
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
look here, you! how dare you! i'd give you a death threat, but i don't actually mean to carry it out... especially since if i kill you for that dastardly evil cliffie then you'll never be able to write the rest >.>;; *grumble* (you know, this is such a mean review ... i really did love it all, despite cursing when i got to the end...)
person Redbells
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SeducedTemper@aol.com

This is SOOO good, I just found this story, normally i dont read stories from this section -- I use to but then stopped -- and this is my first in Yu-Yu-Hakusho and i LOVE this story. You hardly see second person stories and when you do its always short and pathetic. I love the way you have worded this and made the reader feel like they are inside the story. Please when you update can u send me a e-mail telling me you have updated

the e-mail is SeducedTemper@aol.com -- MBunnylove is my aunts e-mail and i dont go on her e-mail so please send it to SeducedTemerp@aol.com

SeducedTemerp@aol.com
SeducedTemerp@aol.com
SeducedTemerp@aol.com -- I would REALLY love an e-mail notification. And im ganna check to see if u have any more stories ^__^
person denise
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah! stupid yusuke! he better not fire at me! anyways, great chap, update soon ^^
person animegirl007
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Who's going to save her.....Kurama or Hiei ?????.....update ...I need the answer as well as more of the story........
person Neoki Jaganshi
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! holy shit is yusuke gonna shoot me? is he that stupid...wait i don't wanna know the answer to that question please update soon i love hiei. and your righting is fun to read!
person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon love the story
person Sada
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I lovers your story! ^-^ It's great! *huggles it* <.< >.> *makes a shrine for it* ^-^ I hope you update quickly. Keep it up! *wavewave* Bubyes.
person animegirl007
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it...Hiei payed a little attention to me.....that was sweet in his own way. I like that you have Genkai help the character using a power that she didn't even know she had.....if I understanding the story correctly.....update soon please...I so love your story.....
person Neoki Jaganshi
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay an update! my mom read this while i was on the lemon (i went to the bathroom) and when i came back her eyes were all like @_@ and she was looking at me funny (i am only 13 but i know more than any adult) i love this story!
person Kayla
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Update soon! ^_^ Could you e-mail me when you update? I don't really get on this site much and I don't want to miss the next chapter!

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